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Hey, I haven' updated my journal in a while so i thought i could do so now.
this is a small portion of a new ending for Lord of the Flies I'm writing based on an English assignment (in other words, i'm too damn lazy to write the whole thing... stare ). it takes place when they are rescued and Jack sees the naval officer and ship:
And as Jacks eyes, clouded as they were by the savagery that had taken him, lay upon the naval officer, akwardly staring at the ship in embarrassment of the others' tears, it was as if a switch had been flipped. With a cry of utter horror, Jack's arms found their way6 around his slim, toned figure in a fruitless attempt to pull himself back from the abyss he had flung himself into long ago. his mind, a complete disaster, only screamed at him to get on with hunting Ralph, however, the burning agony of his soul at what he had caused ripped through him, stilling all motion.
Ralph, upon hearing the outcry looked up from his spot on the ground, along with the othersa who were curious, and perhaps frightened, of the blood-curdling roar that filled the ruined paradise with a sense of hopelessness and panic beyond what Ralph thought Jack was capable of in his current position. as he watched the broken boy, he came to a desicion. Ralph slowly walked up to Jack in the middle of the savages' fear filled stupor and, hesitantly, laid a touch to Jack's shoulder.
At the contact, Jack reeled. Peering at Ralph through thick, wild bangs, before, with a cry, he ran to the mountain with wild determination written in his eyes. Ralph, in shock, merely stood there a moment to absorb what had just happened.
"Don't go after him," th officer called to the bewildered youth. "i have a feeling that he's far to gone to save"
The statement fell on deaf ears however, as Ralph ran after the boy.
I have to get him and bring him back Ralph thought, although he knew he probably couldn't. I need to bring him back to himself! He still has some humanity left, i SAW it! That means he can still be saved!
Those thoughts in mind, Ralph's legs carried him even faster...
TBC... if i feel like it.
Okay, okay so i didn't get to finish at a place i thight was okay.
my fingers started getting tired (i just finished writing a paper for history class before i came here). I'll finish it to my satisfaction when i have more time (doesn't help that i'm in, like, 4 clubs, and 2 kinds of scouts). It may be crap, but at least i could make it stink! biggrin ... I'm listening to No Bravery by James Blunt right now. Fun song, fun song! I love Lord of the Flies heart heart !! my mother thinks i'm a freak for it, but NO MATTER!!! ... cuz, i was kind of a freak anyway... mrgreen
I think it's time for me to go now, so, without further adiou( spelled wrong, prolly stare )
Anywhos,
Bye-bye
P.S. heres some fun stuff for everyones enjoyment! rolleyes emo xp talk2hand ninja burning_eyes W00T! Ph34r m3 alld my sk1llz! xp ... i'm so lonely emo Byesies 4 reelz dis tiemz!
 BlackBleedingRoses539 · Fri Oct 10, 2008 @ 04:51pm · 0 Comments |
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