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Good-Bye for now
Oh how i long for you.
I call your name into the night.
only to hear no reply.
why did you have to leave me?
why did you go away?

Forever and ever i have called for you,
awaiting your return.
only to never hear from you.
why is the only thing i have to say.
why did you have to leave me.

I long to be near you,
just one last time.
I can't wait to see you again.
I only hope you come this time.
Why did you not last time.

Was i not good enough for you.
was i not skinny enough for you.
was i not smart enough for you.
i have waited along time for you
never to see or hear from you.

I have waited ten long years for you.
I have wasted my life away.
I can not wait for you anymore.
I can only say one thing.
And that is:

I guess this is good-bye.




(i know it doesn't ryhme. Not all poems have too. I know it isn't very good either. you can't blame a person for trying tho.)

Sinful Fool
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  • User Comments: [2]
    Yaymeimashi
    Community Member





    Fri Aug 25, 2006 @ 05:43pm


    Well. That was weird. You're weird. It's good though. Could use some work on the grammar and punctuation, and a little work with word choice.

    love ya forever and ever. heart


    Sinful Fool
    Community Member





    Sat Aug 26, 2006 @ 12:13am


    Ok. well thanks for the compilment and y don't u help me with the mistakes.


    Much love 4 ya too.


    User Comments: [2]
     
     
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