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Through my young mind.
Hello all and welcome to my journal. This journal is going to be just about my life and how my days are but it's also gonna be like a story here and there. And sometimes if I feel like it I will also be writing poems and silly comments.
The beginning
"Hi! my name is keliara and this is a story about me, but don't worry it's kinda boring at first but later on it gets really interesting. "So are you ready because it's about to begin!"

It's 6:00 in the morning when keliara's alarm goes off.
*beep...beeeep, click* ~yawn~ *man am I tried, I better hurry up so I can get to school on time.* From downstairs, "keliara, hurry up so you can get your breakfast before the bus comes." said casey, her little brother. ~sigh~ Grimly with a shout. "I'm coming, I'm coming, hold your hourses will ya I just woke up."
"geez does he have to do that every morning" she murmered.

{Yeah, that's how it used to be,, before he died and yet I can't believe I was so mean at times and so ignorant , that I never thought he would be gone... *snaps* like..that and I never did think I would miss him so much but now I know how it feels to lose someone so close to you... but... once their gone they become to far to reach, but enough about how it was, let's get back to what is... the story.}

It's monday may 1st, Keliara's at school and have a very quiet morning, when suddenly. " Keliara, Keliara OH MY GOD, you won't believe what just happened!" Christia said running towards her. " What happen!?" Keliara said surprised. Trying to catch her breath Christia explained. " I was walking down the street yesturday and saw kyla kissing some boy from our school." " Really who?" Keliara asked unenthusiastically. " Well I didn't see his face but I think his might be in class B.. Ms. kimbly's class." Christia said with excitment. " Uh huh... well can you describe what he looks like or are you just making this up." " I'm serious keliara, why don't you believe me?" "because first of all, you get to carried away sometimes and I don't want any trouble to start. Second reason is so that you don't get so rialed up and say something that you and ME might regrate." " Oh come on when have I ever gotten you into trouble." Christia said with a small smile. Keliara looked at her in amazment, Chirstia seeing her expression, gave Keliara a " Don't answer that question" look.

" OK, ok, I get your point." Christia said, in a slitly irritated voice. " Well, That's good because I thought I would have to tell you about everything you put me through since we first met, like the time you thought your mom was dating you own bro- ." " SSSSHH! I thought we swear an oath to keep that a secret or did you forget?" "Of course not, but still you shouldn't be so hard on yourself, besides, you were only five years old." Keliara said in a clam and reasonable tone. " It doesn't matter the fact is you brought it back up on to the surface of my life and that's a BIG no,no in my book." Christia said. " Alright already, I promise I won't bring it up again, now will you continue with what you were saying before." " Oh, fine, but if you break your promise, I swear I'll BREAK you." Christia said very firmly.

After Christia told Keliara about his, light brown eyes, brown hair, great smile, and "perfect" skin, she started to feel like she was reading someones diary and she didn't feel to happy about it because she wouldn't want anyone to read hers, {If she had one}. After hear Christia describe what ne was wearing, she started to feel like she was having a de-ja-vo moment, which always makes her feel sick. "Christia..." Keliara said, finally. " I think I had enough for one day." " What's that supposed to mean?" Christia said softly. " What I mean is, today has been a long day and I like the fact that your interested in finding out who that guy is...but... I'm not ok." pause. " I mean he sounds cute and all but I just feel to laid back to think about him right now, alright." Keliara said in a soft, but slitly nervous voice. " oh....alright, fine keliara." Christia said with a smile. " But.. instead of telling me how you feel, just tell me you are having another one of your de-ja-vo moments and I'll leave you alone, k" " What! you knew!?" keliara said with a surprised look on her face. " I course I knew, remember.. I'm your BEST FRIEND and best friends need to know these things... and plus, I got that from your mom." " WHAT!!!" " Calm down i'm just kidding." Christia said with a laugh. " oh, well bye" keliara said. " bye, see you tomorrow." Christia said waving.

When Keliara got home, she felt somehow reliefed but yet alittle odd. She opened the door slowly and walked to the kithen feeling like she forgot something. Then she started to wonder where her mom was at a time like this. Keliara put it in the back of her mind for a moment and went to tha refrigerator to get a drink, when... she saw it, the note that horried her in so many ways that made her shout out loud " OH MY GOD, I FORGOT CASEY!!" Keliara ran upstairs and got her coat trying hard not to panic. She than ran down that stairs, almost tripping along the way, back to the kithen to get her cell phone. But to her discomfort, she noticed sit was dead. "oh, great." She murmured. "I can't even called the school, this horrible, if I don't get my butt down to his school soon i'm going to be in so much trouble!" Keliara said in a worried tone. She dropped her cell on the table and left the house in a hurry. Keliara when to the garage to get her bike so she could reach casey faster.

10 minutes after she left the house, she reached the school and thought { IF I had walked it would have taken me 20 instead of 10.} Trying to catch her breath she ran to the front doors of the school, but they were locked. Then she went to the bench where casey always sits and waits for her. To her disappointment he wasn't there. " Oh, no , first I forget to pick him up, then I don't see him at the bench, and to top things off it's starting to rain, ahh where could he be?!" All of a sudden Keliara started to hear a ~squeak~ sound from a distance and she started to realize it sounded familar, like she heard it before from somewhere. She moved torward the sound and it got louder and sharper. "Casey?" she said in a whisper and the sound stopped. she paused and walked alittle farther and around the corner of the school she heard a voice say "hello? is someone there?" It sounded like a little boy. "Casey?" she again but this time a little louder as she finished going around the corner, she saw a boy on a swing. "Keliara? is that you?" he said back. " OH my god casey it is you, I'm so glad I found you." Keliara said running to go hug him. While she was hugging him she heard sobbing and to her surprise Casey was crying. " Hey casey what's wrong?" ~sniff..sniff~ " I..I thought you forgot about me." he said with a frown. " OH no, I would never forget about you." {well not completely anyway sweatdrop } she thought to herself. " you sure" "yeah I'm sure and I promise I won't ever pick you up late again ok. now lets go home." "ok and I'll keep this just between you and me." Casey said winking at her and that made her laugh.

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  • User Comments: [5]
    ~jadesnow~
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    Tue Jun 13, 2006 @ 11:10pm


    Man this story is going better than I thought it would because this is my first story I've ever written and my first journal at the same time. blaugh I'm so happy it turned out good because at first I was nerous and thought I was to inexperirenced to do it but then I said to myself that I'll just type what comes to mind and see what happens later.
    I got more help than you might think though, mainly from one of my favorite books the sisterhood of the traveling pants and all the anime I've watched over the years. {geez that's a lot of support then I thought I had. sweatdrop }

    well I'm happy it's going ok and now I'm going to keep working on it and finish it no matter what happens. biggrin


    sassy_gurl_lover
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    Tue Jun 13, 2006 @ 11:18pm


    Its great spelling needs help but the story is wow. it needs a bit of action but other wise its great


    ~jadesnow~
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    Thu Jun 15, 2006 @ 03:44am


    You have a pretty good storyline. Watch out for misspelled words!! Use the dictionary whenever in doubt. It's always helpful, especially for me. Keep up the good work. smile

    ~Lynda


    Raindrops of Blood
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    Sat Jun 17, 2006 @ 12:30am


    sounds good


    klaah
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    Mon Jun 19, 2006 @ 03:09am


    its really good, but is this real of fake?


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