this is a story that i made year or so ago.
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The Vampires in the woods
Chapter 1: The hiking trip
It September first, it was the beginning of fall here in Valein Height Wallets and my family was going hiking in the wood to day. As I was getting my stuff ready for the long hike that my parent has told us about. So went I was done I went down stairs to see my mom and dad waiting for Katie to finish up her breakfast once I had gotten there. My sister Katie is eleven years old she had blondish brown hair and green eyes she was a little bit tall for a eleven year old when you put her next to her friends that come over on saturday. As my mom had her back pack over her shoulder and was taking katie's bowl after she had finished her food. Once we had every thing for our trip we got in the car and we drove to this place that my dad knew all his life. It was the first time he showed us this.
Chapter 2 : The woods
As my family and I were following dad through the woods as we're walking I saw something that moved so fasted that I could only get a glimpse of a shadow of a person as we were walking I thought that it was my imagination as I saw what could have been a bird flying in. While we find a good spot to sit at to eat my dad was looking around. I didn't know why would he be looking around here does he feel like he being follow by someone in stand of us? I then went up to him and asked him, "what the matter dad is there something out here that is bother you. You look worry, dad?" he then looks at me and didn't says a thing when I asked him that question it was kind weird because that wasn't like him. As we all sat down to eat my mom had asked him what's wrong and he said, "It's nothing let's get back to eating now." Once we started to walk again I heard something move in the bushes my dad had stop us by putting his arms out. My mom asked him,"what's the matter? Why are we stoping here now?" but he didn't answer her but said,"they are here why now of all thing when I leave the house with my family...why why" then he looks at the bushes that were a feet away from him and he grabs a rock and says,"show your self!" and when that didn't happen he throw the rock at bushes I then heard something screech when the rock went into the bushes then I saw these two poking their heads out and they were humans. How did he know they were there. When the girl look at us she said,"look what we got here it Vlad. And who are these human doing with you. You know this place is forbidden to a loud humans in these parts of the woods are you trying to have the human kind find out that we excess!" "No. And don't call me that anymore my name is Alexander" then the girl laughs then the guy that was with her had gave her a look and she stops and said," now since that over with you'll have come with us Vlad. They have to go before the other see them and it will be to late for them." My dad looked at us and told us to go before it was late. We had to do what he said and my mom had to grab Katie so we could leave quicker with out her companying. Just when we were about to leave I hear the mans said something and we stopped and turned around. He then looks at me then my sister. He then said,"Vlad why didn't you tell us that you only had one daughter? And did even teach her what she is or are you trying to make her think she a human like her mother? You know one of these days when she gets older and finds out that she not a human and your not there to tell her what do you think going to happen, hmm?" "How did you know that one of my girls aren't human? And that both are my children." "Will you tell by looking at your daughters eyes and tell me that one has the eyes of our kind." As my dad looked at Katie and then at me he gasp when he looked at a me. As I was about to run for it I saw him launch at me once I was a foot away I was grab by him. I screamed and my dad told mom and Katie to get to the car. And once they leaved I looked at him and he told the man to let go of me. I ran to my dad and felt save next to him. And asked him," what's going on dad?why can't I leave?"he then looked at me and said ,"I'm sorry but it is law that when one is new." I didn't know what was going on went all of a sudden the man was about to grab me again when my dad got in front of me and said, "Leave my daughter alone she been through enough of your action already. Do you what her to run every time she see you. Hmmm?" he didn't said a thing but walked away. Once he was ten feet away my dad turns around to look at me. He said ," I know that right now you scared and want to know what's going on. But soon though will be answer ones we get to the palace. Just stay next to me and no one will hurt you. Ok?" I just nodded my head. And then my dad and I went to follow the two the were further away from us.
Chapter 3: find out who really I am
As we were walking through the woods my dad kept on watch the man in front of us. While we're walking I looked around and realized that their were a lot of movement out there. Then somebody had grab me from the back. I tried to get them off but who every this was strong. I was then take away from my dad I screamed telling this person to let me go. Just then something hit me in back of my head and then I was out.
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I soon wake up in a room that looked like I went back in time to the 1800 as I put my hand on my neck I heard something jingle and I look were that soundtw came from and it was a chain. I then realized that I was chained to a wall. As I was looking around I heard a door open. I pretend to be a sleep not knowing if they knew I was awake or not. As the foot steps got louder towards me. I try to keep my eyes close I then heard a woman's voice ,"You can gently wake her up now" once she said that somebody else had nudged my left leg with their foot a couple of times. And I pretended to wake up. "Where I am?" but they did said a thing but when I looked up I saw their faces and for some reason they looked familiar I tried to remember where I've seen these two before but couldn't put my finger on it. While I was looking at them I made myself look around them. Just then the woman had bend down and garb my right hand that had the shackle on it and she grabs a key from her left pocket and unlocked the shackle. She then pulled me up with her as she was getting up.
After we had leaved the room we were soon out side. I then saw all these people walking around in old fashion clothes were the girls only were long dress and the men were suites. As the two that were next to me pulled me forwards. As we were walking every one was turning their heads and soon all eyes were on me. As we got to a bridge I saw a not a castle but a palace right in front of me and I couldn't believe how big it was. Just then a carriage had came flying by us. After that I was takin inside of the palace to find my father there I wanted to run up to him but the two people had held me right were I was. I then called out to my dad. Just when he was about to said something I heard a bother voice come out and my dad turn around to look at this person and before I knew it I was on my hand and knees like the other. When I looked up I saw a man sitting in a chair looking down a upon us. When he looked at me,"who dares bering in a young one in to the Palace of Bloods!" he sound angry but his expression what different. But when the woman the was on my right looked at him but I didn't hear her voice but the man who's probe must be the king because he had gold around him and on his clothes. But then he said,"Are you share that she is the one?" I then looked at the woman and saw her nod her head. Then my dad told him that I wasn't ready for this that it to early for this but the king ignored him and told the two to bering me closers to him to have a better look at me. Once they had me in front of the king. He then looked at me from head to toe. After that he told them put me in a class with the other young ones. I heard my dad screaming out " NO! You can't does this!" but before any thing happen I found myself in another room with kids my age. But when I looked at the old clock it said 2:30pm that when I heard some of the kids wining a girl in a beautiful blue and purple dress came up to and asked me was time when they were go to feed them. I didn't know what she was meaning I didn't know what to said to her. So I told her," I don't know when they are coming?" and I didn't know them one bit. I soon find a play to sit down and I was glad that my iPod was taken. Once I started to put my headphones on when another girl had came over but this time she sat next to me. I thought there was no other spot to sit at so I quite my music so it doesn't scare her when my music comes on. When I looked down at my screen it said Tiesto: Lethal Industry after that from that same artists a song called Century. While I was listening to my music the girl next to me turns her head to looked at me with a confuse look on her face when she looked at me. I asked her if she wanted to listen to techno music on my iPod and she looked cruise at me went I gave her my left headphone to her. She just looked at it. I then said,"Here I'll show you. It goes in your ear and then you hear music come out of it. Don't you even have a cell phone at least?" "What's a 'cell phone'?" I sigh and told her what it was and all the things it had. Just then I heard a door open and all the kids went all towards the door. And I heard someone said,"fresh blood finally I feel like it been forever." Just then I heard chains raiding and saw these people with bite marks on them. And before I started to pay attach I saw these kids taking them down to the ground and biting them were they could so the others could attack these people. For some reason someone had yelled at me. And before I knew it they graded me and dragged me across the floor and said that if I don't "eat" then I become weak. I didn't know what they were talking about. Once I looked at the kids I saw blood dripping off their chins and growling in a non-human sound that can be made by a creature or animal like a lion or a tiger. While I was just standing there and watch I was soon pushed into the group. Just then when I smelled the blood it didn't smell like regular smell when blood comes out it would smell like iron or rust but when I smelled this one. It smell sweet and mouth watering when I got a whiff of it and then all sudden I couldn't remember what happen one min I'm breathing in the sweet smell and the next thing I know is had blood on my clothes and when I put my hand to my face I felt this wet liquid on my chin and when I looked at my hand it had blood dripping off my finger tips. My first thought was what was happening to me didn't I really just drink that persons blood! Now I don't even know who I am anymore. To continue....
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