<center>Why can't I refuse to cry? There's nothing anymore What is it to you if I should die? You can bring me back What if we could look beyond us and see? I wonder why you try What else could we possibly be? A memory of me have you Could we defy the binds on us to hold? My body is so sore Can you be my soldier bold? Wounded from the attack Can you truly see me underneath this mask? There are no more tears to cry Would you stay beside me if I ask? I think I love you too....~</center>
I like this one. 3nodding And, if I read all the rhyming lines and then all the non-rhyming it flows better for some reason. I'm not sure how I came upon this realization. sweatdrop
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Happy0 · Community Member · Wed Dec 01, 2004 @ 10:17am
Yeah...I guess I was bored....
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· Community Member · Thu Dec 02, 2004 @ 12:27am
Why can't I refuse to cry? There's nothing anymore What is it to you if I should die? You can bring me back
Reminds me of Kain.........
And this is interesting...a love poem....awww, I get to see the romantic side of Kaaaaaaaain!! AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW!
On a much serious note,
"Would you stay beside me if I ask? I think I love you too....~"
Sounds like something I would say...the top one though...it's beautiful, by the way, Kain.
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Viirage · Community Member · Sat Dec 04, 2004 @ 01:14am