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Lost Music Note
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Revived
I thought that I could only love,
That hatred in my heart was never heard of,
My heart may have been fragile, but it was pure,
Never hurt anyone on purpose, I'd only cure,
I took the broken pieces of my heart and tried to fix it fast,
Never attacked anyone with the bloody, sharp glass,
But you make it so tempting, you burned away my joy,
Grabbed my heart and crushed it like a useless toy,
All happiness faded, all the love died,
Everything turned black, my soul, my pride,
And all you cared about was your own satisfaction,
You always enjoyed seeing my pained reaction,
But now that you are finally out of my life,
Out of mind, out of heart, no more pain, no more strife,
I have slowly healed, with the help of love, and friends,
The pain is subtly there, but it will soon see that happy end,
I will be happy again, I will love and survive,
My heart will breathe again, it will be revived.


Written in 2009





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HollowedQueen
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comment Commented on: Wed Oct 14, 2009 @ 11:00am
wow thats really good!
will you please read my poems in my journal and tell me what you think?


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