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POEMS THAT I WROTE MYSELF
To write my poetry in for others to read.
One by one, I watch angels fall,
Then they all stand up tall,
I look at one then I say,
What's wrong with God on this faithful day,
Well my friend can't you see,
God has finally set us free.






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salty roots
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commentCommented on: Wed May 13, 2009 @ 04:25am
This is really nice.
I like the juxtaposition of "fall" and "tall".


commentCommented on: Fri May 15, 2009 @ 03:06am
you do well with rhyming



Nyght wanderer
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Zori_Rose3
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commentCommented on: Thu Sep 03, 2009 @ 05:11am
omg this is my favorite you are so good at writing poems... cry


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