This is my first poem ever:
This sadness I feel now Is slowly building in me There is nowhere to go Except down and under all of these depressings things This sadness I am feeling Is there nowhere out No matter how hard I try I can't forget the love I once had The love that broke too early for me The love that caused all my pain and unhappiness Is this the start of the rest of my life
I couldn't believe that I wrote it but yeah there it is you guys can criticize it. But remember it is my first one.
MunkiesRokMySoks · Thu Dec 01, 2005 @ 01:59am · 1 Comments |