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darkness
depressing
I Miss You
i miss you

the smiles

your laughter

i miss the happiness we shared

i miss your love

our promise to love each other

i miss everything about you

about us

everything lost

lost in the darkness of the passion called lust

missing the simple days of peace

i miss you

everything about you

holding you

treating you like a queen

i miss just sitting and holding by the fire

kissing only to be kissed back and loved

missing the love between us

everything about us

i miss you

the darkness consumes us more

no more time

no time to live

to breathe

we wither in it

trying to love

trying to bring peace and happiness

nothing

just pain and the black darkness of our hearts

i miss what we shared

the love we had

the darkness consumes all

all our love

everything

reaching

trying

trying to love you

trying to reach

waiting for the light that will never come

darkness

a dot in the darkness

a light we share

reaching and grasping

holding you

loving you

whispering sweet words

i miss you







this is a very raw poem i need someone to tell me wat is wrong with it

Angel Damian Rayn
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  • User Comments: [5]
    The_Forgotten_Prisoner
    Community Member





    Tue Apr 14, 2009 @ 11:36pm


    add more fix it up


    The_Forgotten_Prisoner
    Community Member





    Tue Apr 14, 2009 @ 11:47pm


    i like it but fix the line kissing only to be kisses back and loved kisses should be kissed


    The_Forgotten_Prisoner
    Community Member





    Tue Apr 14, 2009 @ 11:52pm


    perfect


    Arrol-S
    Community Member





    Wed Apr 15, 2009 @ 12:11am


    That's a nice piece of poetry.


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    tesazombie
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    Wed Apr 15, 2009 @ 03:08am


    I LOVE IT!!!!


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