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Jacob's story ch1
Here it goes for chapter one of Jacob's back story.

I made some minor changes, but you'll understand later lol

On a rainy day of April, a child was born. He was given the name Victor Monteque born to a family of scientists who worked for the military. When the child looked for love, he only received pain.

~Chapter one, Happy Birthday~


"Happy Birthday, Victor!" called Victor's mother cheerfully one April morning.

Victor had woken up that morning like any other, leaving his bedroom. Standing on the stairs he was greeted by his loving mother, a small wrapped package in her hands. Inside the box, was a single hematite Earing. As Victor picked it up from the box, his mother moved her hair away from her ear, showing a copy of the earing peirced on her earlobe.

"Now you'll always have a part of me with you" She said smiling. Pulling at a small latch on the earing, she opened a small small compartment with her picture in it. His picture was in her own earing. She helped her son put on the earing.

It was one of the happiest days of his life, and yet also the worst.

"Mom? Where's papa?" Victor asked that evening, poking at his birthday dinner.

His mother stiffened but kept her smile on. Playing with his hair she said "He's not going to be here tonight untill late Victor. his job as been running him wild."

"Oh. Ok." He said, trying not to sound dissapointed. It was rare to see his father anyway. He should have known. His father never showed any kind of emotion towards his child.



"What the hell are you thinking Feras?! He's our SON! Feras answer me..."
".......It's to be expected. I don't need a son Clera, I need a candidate for the stone"

Victor woke that night to the sound of his mother's and father's coming from the stairs. Slowy he got up, rubbing at his eyes on his way to the door

"Mom? Dad? Is that you?" He asked, stepping out of his room. looking down the stairs, he saw his mother being held still by his father. "Mom?"

"Victor! RUN! Feras please! stop this!"
"Shut up woman" he said, throwing her in a room and locking the door.




.........

ok my friends are trying to get me out of the house so ill continue chapter one later.

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  • User Comments: [2]
    Kitsuan
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    Wed Feb 13, 2008 @ 08:10pm


    Dammit. D< WRITE MORE WOMAN!!!!!!

    Pls? :3 Your stories are kewl.


    Hatrena
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    Sat Feb 23, 2008 @ 10:42pm


    It's so sad.

    D:

    But well written, I loved it!! KEEP WRITING!!!!!!!!!!!!!! xD


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