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The place where you get to see what goes inside of my head! O.o
You get to learn about me in a non-conventional way. Read what I write and think. You may get the gist or not. XD
Ill
Someone tell me I'm not ok.
Just say to my face that I'm sick.
Tell them all I'm ill,
say to them there is no cure.

If there is a cure, hold it off.
Give me my medication instead;
A dose of tears in front of them all.
Let them see what I've felt.
Show them all I've never been ok.
Tital waves of tears will flow.

Let's all cry.
The tears of the tormentors will flow.
Tears of those who never helped will spill.
Countless tears will flow from us all.
We'll all weep at the site of our lack of concern.

That rejuvination, that cure,
who knows when it will come.
I could be sick for decades,
or maybe just a month.

Right now I stay in a comatic state.
My life's in eveyones hands.
Will they pull the plug or save me?
It's all up to them, but personally?
I'd like my medication now.

Tell me what you thought! blaugh
I'm always looking for ways to improve!!!!! whee


Alibis of the Heart
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  • User Comments: [3]
    It's great! So good, I'm steeling your idea. ninja

    comment chibinecochan_13 · Community Member · Tue Jan 15, 2008 @ 01:38pm
    I like it ! It made me cry beacuse its so beautiful. whn someone crys you know its oogd or wenever they show a feeling that is not hatred you know its good

    comment xXxLuNar RainBowXxX · Community Member · Thu Jul 24, 2008 @ 07:54am
    I'm a little jealous now >.< I haven't written something good like this in a long time! I also haven't posted all my poems... u think I'll add a few. care to check them out? thanks! ^^

    comment my_schaumburg_summer · Community Member · Thu Jun 03, 2010 @ 03:31am
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