Welcome to Gaia! :: View User's Journal | Gaia Journals

 
 

View User's Journal

Report This Entry Subscribe to this Journal
flyingdreamer14's stories
Hi! I'm flyingdreamer14 and I like to write my own little stories that I hope in the future will be published. I also like to Draw! :D
crying A Childs Simple Cry crying
chapter 1
Everyone believes that a child is full of happiness, full of joy and curiosity, but it all can be taken away
A mother and a father argue continuosly, not noticing they're child is watching, while the child settles down in a corner, watching as his heart begins to ache.
The young child's eyes began to water, as his heart started pounding against his chest.Before he knew it, little skinny streams began to race down his cheek, glittering and twinkling from the lit candle he held in his dirty and injured fingers. Before he could stop himself, his eyes sprayed water all over the place, his silent mouth let out a small trembling whimper, and huddled up closer to the corner until he looked as though he was a ball barely taken out of the rain
"Hush up you cursed child!" The mother spoke so loud a car outside began to beep. "Go cry elswhere! Get out of my face you devilish thing!" The childs father spoke, almost as loud as his mother.
Most children would argue or make a nasty comment, but the boy only stood up and began to walk away, leaving the moment of silence where his parents were glaring at him with they're flaming eyes of blue and green.
This boy's name was Kano, his name made for a dog, but his parents didn't care. In fact, his parents didn't even name him, people just started calling him that as if calling him a dog.
As Kano walked down the dark, endless hallway, his eyes pink with dried tears all around, he obeyed his mother's demand, not even thinking of what she said or why he was being punished, just only obeyed. He walked into an empty room with no windows or light except for the candle he still grasped in his hands. The room was square shaped, with wooden floors, walls, and ceiling, except in the far left corner was two ragged blankets and next to it was a small tray holding only one slice of bread with nothing on it and a broken glass halfway full of water.
Kano cautiously crept into the quiet room only lit by the candle in his hand, seeing images of his mother telling him if he got in her way, he would have to sleep in the atic, full of rats and spiders, and would have nothing to eat for a week.
Kano didn't know haw to speak or read, but he could understand people when they talked to him. He didn't go to school, nor did he know what school even was, but he loved books, he couldn't read them, but he loved looking at the beautiful painted pictures, always so colorful and full of joy.
Sadly, he didn't know what joy was or feeling. He only knew how to cry, frown, and smile, but he didn't fully know what they meant or why the happened, but he did have one emotion he knew that was always in his emerald green eyes- loneliness.

Thank you for reading!
Depending on how people enjoy this chapter will tell me if I should write ( or type ) chapter 2.
-flyingdreamer14

flyingdreamer14
Community Member
flyingdreamer14
«Prev | Next
Archive | Home

  • 05/11/08 to 05/04/08 (1)
  • 02/17/08 to 02/10/08 (1)
  • 12/02/07 to 11/25/07 (1)




  • User Comments: [3]
    animalsaverkid8
    Community Member





    Tue Mar 04, 2008 @ 11:42pm


    I love it! Even though it is sad, I love how you gave such detail!
    crying Poor Boy crying


    animalsaverkid8
    Community Member





    Sat Apr 26, 2008 @ 02:26am


    do another chapter! do another chapter! .....please? 4laugh


    Spica-Moon
    Community Member





    Fri May 16, 2008 @ 11:39pm


    that..........was........wonderful crying
    even if its a sad story for now is incredible blaugh


    User Comments: [3]
     
     
    Manage Your Items
    Other Stuff
    Get GCash
    Offers
    Get Items
    More Items
    Where Everyone Hangs Out
    Other Community Areas
    Virtual Spaces
    Fun Stuff
    Gaia's Games
    Mini-Games
    Play with GCash
    Play with Platinum