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shadowly darkness
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poem: close
i've writhing this myself so i dont wnt you to copie any part of it



Close

Darkness surrounds my hart.
Hate drove us apart.
Happiness is no longer here.
Love is no longer in the ear.
Colours are gone.
I just can’t be strong.
I can’t take this anymore, I just want to close.

Close my ears.
So I can’t hear all the judgements,
that people make about my,
without taking time to know me.

Close my eyes.
So I can’t see the one ho talks about me,
without having the courage to face me.

Close my hart.
So I can’t feel the pain they cause,
because they tease me.

Close my mind.
So I can’t think I’m what they say,
although I know they are wrong.

Close me.
So I can’t be hurt anymore.





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XAmbitiously_DisastrousX
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comment Commented on: Tue Sep 18, 2007 @ 10:19pm
Now i'm serious, you got serious talent!


comment Commented on: Tue Sep 18, 2007 @ 10:24pm
*blushes* tnx biggrin


why do you like this poem ???

srry but i just want to know why ppl think they are good or bad just so i know...



shadowly darkness
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Zyibis
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comment Commented on: Tue Sep 18, 2007 @ 11:14pm
Somehow this reminds me of me a long time ago sweatdrop


comment Commented on: Tue Sep 18, 2007 @ 11:16pm
well for me this is my daily life...

wanna share youre story ???



shadowly darkness
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Zyibis
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comment Commented on: Tue Sep 18, 2007 @ 11:34pm
You wish to know? Well it's something that I don't like sharing in a place where people can read it.. Maybe in a PM sometime..


comment Commented on: Wed Sep 19, 2007 @ 08:18am
this one is better, i not really a fan of poem, but its good.



kaiyo83
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shadowly darkness
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comment Commented on: Wed Sep 19, 2007 @ 01:14pm
i think this one is worser haha but tnx biggrin

and yes zyibis i want to know so pm me about it when youre ready for it biggrin


comment Commented on: Sat Sep 22, 2007 @ 05:12pm
no one that annoy people on purpose is going around reading peoples diary, they go arround on forums and rallys, thats what attract the most.



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shadowly darkness
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comment Commented on: Mon Sep 24, 2007 @ 10:02am
yeah but i'm not going to post everything biggrin

i always say: if ppl really want to know me then they have to do something for it biggrin like reading my journal haha


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