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Amorpheous
Community Member





Fri Aug 03, 2007 @ 09:38pm


Not lame! Not lame!!!!!

Here is a poem that I wrote:

The Burn of Delight

Flickering heat slowly mixing from glowing yellow to bleeding red
Feeling cool flame, searing touch, flame hot, ember bed
Burning tongue flies high to the moon
Moon bright, soft glow, almost gone too soon

Flames licking, burning down, wood charred, tinder gone
Disappearing fast, flame create molten pond
As light fades, as burn dies down
Finding no fault in setting fire to town

Walking away, the heat to my back
Like a burning heat, like a cold fact
Flames dance, moon beams, whispers speak
Charming destruction as the flames reach their peak

So far away, the flames of pleasure
The further enticement to further leisure
Of future life and love of flame
Destruction abound and let there be pain



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candylicious watermelon
Community Member





Fri Aug 03, 2007 @ 09:40pm


OMG. You are such a better poet then I am.


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