Prisoner 24456
Why am I here? Why are we here? Where is the sanity? Where is my soul? Why do they take our eyes? *Chains are heard rattleing throughout the room* "W-who's there?" *The sound of a childs giggle followed by it's footsteps are heard while a rusty metal hook jabs a woman in the back* No! "Not my child. No... why her?" *The woman put her hand where the hook jabbed her and feels blood rushing out and down her back while a falp of skin falls down on top of her hand* Why don't they just... *The woman thought as she got up and got hun by a hook that somehow got shoved in her throat* "Why didn't you save me mommy?" *A little girl said while giggleing and running off pushing the chains and disapearing once running into the metal door leading to salvation*
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but this was good too, usually people don't put that *'s that you do in their writing, they just type it out.