Rain

[Alltalar]

Evanescent,
this word which I feel has no meaning.
the water,
coming yet so clearly
the rain,
millions but the same.
Me
just another being
Us
just another rain.

mayhap's I should explain this one
the idea is spur of the moment but not the thought of human life and multitude.
I feel that a person is of course one but together we are of course many but that isn't the point at all the point would be though we are many wwe are few we are plenty but we are not forever.
and that as they say is that.  

[WildWildWindWhisperer]

Alltalar

Evanescent,
this word which I feel has no meaning.
the water,
coming yet so clearly
the rain,
millions but the same.
Me
just another being
Us
just another rain.

mayhap's I should explain this one
the idea is spur of the moment but not the thought of human life and multitude.
I feel that a person is of course one but together we are of course many but that isn't the point at all the point would be though we are many wwe are few we are plenty but we are not forever.
and that as they say is that.

Deep, provacative and sweet.
It truly does not require an explaination.
Much enjoyed.
......WildWildWindWhisperer wink ( Vice -Captian)  

[Mistress Spider]

I love it! It's sweet, it's deep, but most importantly it's really easy to understand! In my opinion, you are truly talented!
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[catnapgood]

I like it. I feel dread and at the same time at peace. Wahoo to you. blaugh  

[Pup in Fluff]

It's so short an simple, but deep at the same time.  

[iLazyConscience]

wow. *sits in awed silence* *clears throat* haha.... anyway, that is really good! its really deep and slightly mysterious but it has so much meaning to it! it can help people understand! you are really talented. maybe even an innate talent!