Practice conversation please

[Phatts McDangle]

Donataka wa Nihongo ga boku ni hanasemasu ka. Keiko o irimasu. Boku no nomae Rouben desu ga, America ni kurasimas. Hiragana ga dekimasu. Kore o tadashiku iimasita ka. Domo.

[Can anyone speak Japanese with me? I need practice. My name is Reuben, and I live in America. I can do Hiragana. Did I say this correctly? Thanks.]  

[Tanu-chan]

Reuben Micah

Donataka wa Nihongo ga boku ni hanasemasu ka. Keiko o ga irimasu. Boku no nomae namae wa Rouben desu ga, America ni kurasimas kurashiteimasu. Hiragana ga dekimasu. Kore o tadashiku iimasita ka. Domo.

[Can anyone speak Japanese with me? I need practice. My name is Reuben, and I live in America. I can do Hiragana. Did I say this correctly? Thanks.]

This is what I found for errors. (can I use japanese characters? Do you have it installed? Dx)

Watashi no namae wa Emiko desu. America to Nihon no kokuseki wo motte imasu. Otosan wa america jin de, okasan ga nihon jin desu. Daigaku wa Tokyo Daigaku ni itte, nihon ni sumu koto ni natte imasu.

Suki na anime ya manga wa arimasuka?  

[-Evan Everwood-]

Kind of random, but I thought this was funny.

My teacher just taught us how to say;
こども は おいし.

xD