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 Posted: Mon Feb 19, 2007 5:30 pm
Tell me what you think of this, I wrote it along time ago and I just got the ambition to rewrite it.
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Posted: Mon Feb 19, 2007 5:35 pm
Silent Screams-Chapter one
Warning--> This story is rated pg 13!
Only one word could describe what I was feeling tonight, cold. And being cold caused me to become grumpy and irritable, so I guess I was feeling three things tonight, Grumpiness, irritability and penetrating coldness in the depth of my bones. Logic tells me that I wouldn’t be cold if I wasn’t standing on a sidewalk on a cold, snowy December night wearing extremely skimpy clothes. This is the part where a smart a** would smartly remark “Well why aren’t you wearing a coat, you wouldn’t be cold if you were properly dressed” And I would respond with a large innocent smile “F**** you, I’m in uniform! You wouldn’t buy a plain white box hoping to purchase a well worth product right? Then why would you buy a prostitute who hides their body?” At this point the smart a** would be silent and I would be silently laughing at their large gaped mouth that makes them look oh so ‘sophisticated.’
I’m a male prostitute! Isn’t that wonderful! Well actually no it isn’t. I’ve been a prostitue for a living since I was fifteen; I am now seventeen. And no I did not choose to be a prostitute, I’m forced, but I’ll get to that later as there is a man approaching me right now and I believe he requires my assistance.
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My feet are taking me somewhere, hopefully far away where there are little singing birds and warm tropical heat, and maybe a really sexy man unlike the greasy scumbag from earlier. My shoes are soaked through because of the dirty slush on the sidewalks and the streetlights are casting ominous shadows on the surrounding buildings. These ominous shadows are actually creeping me out, and I’m huddling into my self and wearily looking around for approaching danger. Tonight is not a night I would want to be mugged on since I have quite a fair bit of hard earned money in my pockets. There is a man walking towards me and he’s cloaked in darkness, I instantly shuffle to the left to avoid him. My foot slips on a piece of ice and I fall ‘gracefully’ on my a**.
I curse, and attempt to get to my feet, slipping again and this time landing harshly on my back. “Oh f*** everyone and their little puppies too!” I ground out from between my tightly clenched teeth. My bones ached and my clothes were soaked from the wet sidewalk. My head shot up to look at the man who was the sole reason why I was lying on the bloody sidewalk. The p**** was standing above me with a large laughing grin on his, incredibly handsome face? Oh glee it’s an extremely hot man standing above me, and he laughing at me!
“Oh stuff it!” I growl out as I raise my self successfully onto my feet, my body shivering and shaking from the cold.
“Here.” I looked up at the man, who had long blonde hair tied back into a pony tale, and sharp features. He was holding an extremely warm looking coat outstretched towards me.
“No thanks.” I state, walking past him. And not looking back I made my way to the Neon Seduction, trying to ignore the romance book clichéd description of love at first site, trying to ignore the warm tingly sensation in the pit of my stomach.
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Posted: Tue Feb 20, 2007 3:51 pm
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Posted: Tue Feb 20, 2007 5:27 pm
Wheeeeeeee! I hope there's another part to this story. xd
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Posted: Thu Feb 22, 2007 1:40 pm
Internet-Anime-Goddess Wheeeeeeee! I hope there's another part to this story. xd I'll probably write it on the weekend. I'm gl;ad you like it.
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Posted: Thu Feb 22, 2007 3:58 pm
I liked it a lot...will you please continue the story?
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Posted: Mon Feb 26, 2007 3:45 pm
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Posted: Tue Feb 27, 2007 2:17 pm
that was awesome !!! blaugh its a nice story!!! 3nodding you should write more and contiue this story heart and sorry if i spell any thing wrong sweatdrop and please pm me when the next part of the story comes out whee
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Posted: Tue Apr 17, 2007 11:05 am
ZOMG!! I DEMAND YOU TO CONTINUE THIS FICTION!! xd
oh and PM me if your updating..
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Posted: Thu Apr 26, 2007 4:13 pm
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Posted: Sun May 06, 2007 6:01 pm
I personally find the swear censoring irritating. =/
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Posted: Tue May 08, 2007 1:04 pm
pm me when the next part comes out
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