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 Posted: Mon Jan 22, 2007 7:58 pm
This is my first Naruto-based fanfic. I haven't seen many NaruGaa stories, so I felt inclined to write one. I've only written a few chapters, but there will be more, not to worry.
Title: "Some Vacation"
Author: xdonttrytolovemex
Pairing: NaruGaa
Rating: So far PG-13.
Warning: This takes place after episode 80, and Chapter 138, so if you haven't seen it, or know what happens after that, you might not want to read it. You'll probably be a little confused. lol.
Chapters: Chapter One
Chapter Two
Chapter Three
Chapter Four
Chapter Five [go to my dA gallery, because it's too mature to directly link on this site. Sorry for the inconvenience, people!]
Chapter Six [same as Chp. 5]
Chapter Seven [same as Chp. 6]
I would love to hear some feedback. Do you like it? Hate it? Are there any typos I should know about? Should I continue with it? Constructive criticism is welcomed, as long as you don't cuss me out and say how bad it sucked. Tell me how to make it better if you think that.
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Posted: Sat May 19, 2007 6:36 am
it's good i really liked it
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Posted: Mon May 21, 2007 9:30 pm
Parts of it actually made me giggle (nice use of towels).
Keep on going, it's great! heart
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Posted: Thu May 31, 2007 2:00 pm
I loved it. I laughed so hard I cried at the end.
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