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 Posted: Sat Dec 02, 2006 5:17 pm
Okay, another poem then:
It Gets Harder
As it gets harder for you,
It gets harder for me too.
I can hardly look at you anymore,
Without wondering what you're thinking.
Or if you wonder what I'm thinking.
You're always on my mind you know,
Not just once in awhile but all the time now.
You make me scared for you,
Even though you say I shouldn't be.
You may be silent as the night,
But I can see behind your mask.
As I pull it off,
You put it back on?
Why must you insist on being unafraid,
When there is nothing left to be strong for?
You don't have to be afraid to fall,
Because I'll always be here to catch you.
Just jump.
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Posted: Sat Dec 02, 2006 5:43 pm
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Posted: Sun Dec 03, 2006 3:08 pm
Thank you. It's been on my mind for some time now, I just hadn't written it. I think it can be better though.
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Posted: Thu Dec 07, 2006 5:33 am
It Gets Harder :
Overwhelmed by the emotion within this creative poetic work. The feelings of deep love, passionate kindness, and astonishing pain are wrestling in a wonderful artistic potion.
Thank you, for sharing this lovely poetic work.
Sincerely...
...................WildWildWindWhisperer wink
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WildWildWindWhisperer Vice Captain
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Posted: Sun Dec 10, 2006 3:49 pm
Thank you so much for the comments! ONe question though, does it sound more from the mouth of a girl to a boy she likes, or a person in general to a friend? Because I know which one I was aiming for, but I'm not sure if I hit my mark like I needed to.
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