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 Posted: Wed Jul 19, 2006 7:31 pm
Come with me, It's not so far.
The miles will end and we'll see the stars
My heart's in your hands and I know it's for real
Even if my nonexistence isn't really a deal
Go on forever with me, it's not so long
But we know someday, that we'll all belong
We're a family now and it's okay
In this together, I hope that's the way we will stay
Fly with me, It's not so high
From here on the ground, and right up to the sky
For one moment please, just hear my words
And know that's it's me, when the fate is in slurs
Remember me, It's not so hard
When your pictures fade, on your last birthday card
If we're far away, at least you'll know
And remember that moment we had in the snow
Give your love to me, It's not so grand
When you are away and I'm left on the stand
I want you to know, how I feel deep inside
When you come onto to me, and give me that ride
Sing for me, It's not so bad
Your voice is my drug, it makes me go mad
I'm crazy for you, my insanity's yours
Everynight that you make me, get down on the floors
Cause greif to me, It's not that painful
When you cut into my skin, I feel so rejoiceful
I know I can feel, Am I breaking the law
Can a nobody really have such a flaw
Bleed for me, It's not so red
For I know your with me, alive in the bed
I'll cut your skin, and you will cut mine
We'll feel the pain, and we'll be fine
Hear for me, It's not that loud
For my ears are defening, there is no sound
I have no heart, but inside of it's place
Will forever be you, and a place for your face
I'm looking back now, It's seems so real
That one day I was empty, but now I can feel
The days passed me by, while you critisized
I'll love you forever, Got it memorized?
I'm crying for you, It's oh so right
Believe it my dear, that I could fight
You made me feel strong, Like I was always complete
Right here I'll go, And I've made my seat
I'll wait here for you, It's really the end
But never once you denied, your were my friend
You gave me a heart, now I'm giving it back
I don't deserve you, so I have my things packed
I can feel that I'm going, Now it's just sad
I can't see your face and I really feel glad.
I know I am crying, for real they are tears
For all I can remember is you over these years
I'm dying for you, and I'm oh so glad
You gave me a reason, I was never mad
I wanted to tell you, I loved you that way
Roxas I'm sorry, that's all I can say
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Posted: Wed Jul 19, 2006 7:33 pm
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Posted: Thu Jul 20, 2006 5:33 pm
Aww no one read it crying
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Posted: Sat Jul 22, 2006 9:51 am
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Posted: Sun Jul 23, 2006 8:26 am
Aww, I read it, and I love it! Very cute. Much love for you.
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Posted: Thu Aug 03, 2006 12:28 pm
Wow! eek Love the poem. It's great, and, of course, I love the pictures. They rock. Really.
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Posted: Thu Aug 31, 2006 6:28 pm
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Posted: Sat Sep 02, 2006 7:03 pm
aww... nice work! so much better than I could ever do!
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Posted: Mon Sep 04, 2006 8:46 pm
Ooh. Nice drawings. I'm not much one for poetry because I can't seem to retain any of it (good God, that makes me sound like some uneducated boob sweatdrop ) but the artwork is very nice. heart Makes me want to draw something, myself. Maybe I will.
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Posted: Tue Sep 05, 2006 2:54 pm
OMG! *falls on the floor in sheer amazment* I loved the poem!! (I like the art, I could never draw anything like that!! ^______^) The poem just moved me. I liked the conisistancy of the first line on each stanza. Where it beingins with a command of some sort, then a statement why the person should do so. Or an action and why its happening. *huggles* Great!
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Posted: Tue Jan 02, 2007 9:20 am
I heart your poem and your art!
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Posted: Tue Jan 02, 2007 5:25 pm
I...
Worship the ground you walk on. >o> Honestly, I love you. <3 Man. That poem was way better that the crap I produce. Yours is, creative, inspiring and flowing. Mine: it has about as much creativity as a drunk donkey on tuesday. No kidding. @n@
Artwork = Big luff. Your drawing is just so... detailed and beautiful. I can't draw worth s**t. I hate love you for it. @u@
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Posted: Thu Jan 11, 2007 5:33 am
Ooh, did you ink all of your art? It looks awesome. heart
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Posted: Sat Jan 27, 2007 9:03 pm
Your artistic ability in both words and drawings is amazing! I love the poem, so much, and your drawing style is fabulous!
Keep it up, like I said, it's amazing. =)
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