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 Posted: Sun Aug 22, 2021 7:55 pm
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Queentintin TeamJoy- JoyPlanet , boundless, full, of life, alien! with their bright pastel colors, amusing ,cosmic. They are coming for you!
Howdy QueenTintin!
I've just realized a problem. As JoyRose pointed out:
JoyRose Quick reminder: Haiku has 3 lines where 1st and 3rd have 5 syllables and 2nd line has 7 syllables.
So please resubmit your Haiku entry. I've already accepted your entry, but I just realized there's a problem. I don't want to have to disqualify you because of this problem so I'll give you 24 hours to resubmit your Haiku. cry
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Posted: Sun Aug 22, 2021 8:12 pm
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Vincent Von Richthofen Queentintin TeamJoy- JoyPlanet , boundless, full, of life! with their bright pastel colors, amusing ,cosmic. They are coming for you! Howdy QueenTintin! I've just realized a problem. As JoyRose pointed out: JoyRose Quick reminder: Haiku has 3 lines where 1st and 3rd have 5 syllables and 2nd line has 7 syllables. So please resubmit your Haiku entry. I've already accepted your entry, but I just realized there's a problem. I don't want to have to disqualify you because of this problem so I'll give you 24 hours to resubmit your Haiku. cry Vincent
my bad just saw my mistake, ty *fixing *
done=) |
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Posted: Sun Aug 29, 2021 9:30 pm
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Queentintin Vincent Von Richthofen Queentintin TeamJoy- JoyPlanet , boundless, full, of life! with their bright pastel colors, amusing ,cosmic. They are coming for you! Howdy QueenTintin! I've just realized a problem. As JoyRose pointed out: JoyRose Quick reminder: Haiku has 3 lines where 1st and 3rd have 5 syllables and 2nd line has 7 syllables. So please resubmit your Haiku entry. I've already accepted your entry, but I just realized there's a problem. I don't want to have to disqualify you because of this problem so I'll give you 24 hours to resubmit your Haiku. cry Vincent my bad just saw my mistake, ty *fixing * done=)
Uh, Queentintin.... If you edited your post, did you click on preview instead of submit? Please repost your haiku in a new post cause I'm still seeing the same old submission in the post you submitted. cry
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Posted: Tue Aug 31, 2021 11:44 am
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Vincent Von Richthofen Queentintin Vincent Von Richthofen Queentintin TeamJoy- JoyPlanet , boundless, full, of life! with their bright pastel colors, amusing ,cosmic. They are coming for you! Howdy QueenTintin! I've just realized a problem. As JoyRose pointed out: JoyRose Quick reminder: Haiku has 3 lines where 1st and 3rd have 5 syllables and 2nd line has 7 syllables. So please resubmit your Haiku entry. I've already accepted your entry, but I just realized there's a problem. I don't want to have to disqualify you because of this problem so I'll give you 24 hours to resubmit your Haiku. cry Vincent my bad just saw my mistake, ty *fixing * done=) Uh, Queentintin.... If you edited your post, did you click on preview instead of submit? Please repost your haiku in a new post cause I'm still seeing the same old submission in the post you submitted. cry Vincent
When you finalize points please quote or pm Joy and I so we can finalize team and event stuff. And so she can do vip stuff. Thank you!
*Edited spelling, sorry to double quote* |
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Darkness and Wings Vice Captain
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Posted: Wed Sep 01, 2021 9:01 am
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Posted: Wed Sep 01, 2021 9:19 am
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Posted: Wed Sep 01, 2021 12:26 pm
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Posted: Wed Sep 01, 2021 7:16 pm
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TeamJoy-
JoyPlanet , boundless, full of LIFE
with their bright pastel colors, amusing ,cosmic!
They are coming for you!
here you are, if it goes by 5,7,3 syllables here you go =)
guess I was too late, ! sad was busy,
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Posted: Wed Sep 01, 2021 9:32 pm
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Queentintin TeamJoy- JoyPlanet , boundless, full of LIFE with their bright pastel colors, amusing ,cosmic! They are coming for you! here you are, if it goes by 5,7,3 syllables here you go =) guess I was too late, ! sad was busy,
Hi queenie! Syllable doesnt mean word, it means...looks up google translator...
"syllabe" in french, or a syllable is a single, unbroken sound of a spoken (or written) word. The word JoyPlanet has 3 syllables, boundless has 2 syllables, full has one syllable. Ok? |
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Darkness and Wings Vice Captain
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Posted: Thu Sep 02, 2021 7:19 am
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Queentintin TeamJoy- JoyPlanet , boundless, full of LIFE with their bright pastel colors, amusing ,cosmic! They are coming for you! here you are, if it goes by 5,7,3 syllables here you go =) guess I was too late, ! sad was busy,
I think you were counting words? Word wise you have 6/7/5
We understand busy hun, but you had 12 days to edit. Better luck next time |
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Posted: Thu Sep 02, 2021 9:30 am
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Darkness and Wings Queentintin TeamJoy- JoyPlanet , boundless, full of LIFE with their bright pastel colors, amusing ,cosmic! They are coming for you! here you are, if it goes by 5,7,3 syllables here you go =) guess I was too late, ! sad was busy, its 5/7/5, you have 8/11/6. I think you were counting words? Word wise you have 6/7/5 We understand busy hun, but you had 12 days to edit. Better luck next time
this is true, lol no worries =) |
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Posted: Sat Sep 04, 2021 5:51 am
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Queentintin Darkness and Wings Queentintin TeamJoy- JoyPlanet , boundless, full of LIFE with their bright pastel colors, amusing ,cosmic! They are coming for you! here you are, if it goes by 5,7,3 syllables here you go =) guess I was too late, ! sad was busy, its 5/7/5, you have 8/11/6. I think you were counting words? Word wise you have 6/7/5 We understand busy hun, but you had 12 days to edit. Better luck next time this is true, lol no worries =)
No problem Dudette. You still won a prize anyways cause I liked your Haiku even if it didn't conform to the Haiku rules. And if there's a Haiku writing competition again in future, you know how to write a really good Haiku! biggrin
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Posted: Sat Sep 04, 2021 5:52 am
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Darkness and Wings Queentintin TeamJoy- JoyPlanet , boundless, full of LIFE with their bright pastel colors, amusing ,cosmic! They are coming for you! here you are, if it goes by 5,7,3 syllables here you go =) guess I was too late, ! sad was busy, its 5/7/5, you have 8/11/6. I think you were counting words? Word wise you have 6/7/5 We understand busy hun, but you had 12 days to edit. Better luck next time
Ailinor Queentintin TeamJoy- JoyPlanet , boundless, full of LIFE with their bright pastel colors, amusing ,cosmic! They are coming for you! here you are, if it goes by 5,7,3 syllables here you go =) guess I was too late, ! sad was busy, Hi queenie! Syllable doesnt mean word, it means...looks up google translator... "syllabe" in french, or a syllable is a single, unbroken sound of a spoken (or written) word. The word JoyPlanet has 3 syllables, boundless has 2 syllables, full has one syllable. Ok?
Thanks for explaining to QueenTintin, Dudettes! biggrin
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Posted: Sat Sep 04, 2021 8:31 am
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Vincent Von Richthofen Queentintin Darkness and Wings Queentintin TeamJoy- JoyPlanet , boundless, full of LIFE with their bright pastel colors, amusing ,cosmic! They are coming for you! here you are, if it goes by 5,7,3 syllables here you go =) guess I was too late, ! sad was busy, its 5/7/5, you have 8/11/6. I think you were counting words? Word wise you have 6/7/5 We understand busy hun, but you had 12 days to edit. Better luck next time this is true, lol no worries =) No problem Dudette. You still won a prize anyways cause I liked your Haiku even if it didn't conform to the Haiku rules. And if there's a Haiku writing competition again in future, you know how to write a really good Haiku! biggrin Vincent
ty *hugs* you're sweet =) Happy Sunday ^^ |
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