XX｡｡｡[BIOGRAPHY] XXXXX[Born Lucian Viseran Nostra over 300 years ago, Lucian was born in a time where monsters ran rampant, and monster hunters were abundant. His life would be rife with strife, as when he was an infant, his parents were murdered by a Werewolf. Before baby Lucian could be taken, a hunter was able to subdue and kill the Werewolf. Luckily, or perhaps unluckily, Lucian would be taken to the orphanage to be raised as a hunter, as he had no other family to speak of.
The boy's younger days would be spent studying monster anatomy, weaknesses, habits, etc. His training woudl begin as a mere child, and he would be taught to hunt monsters with extreme prejudice. Upon his 13th birthday, Lucian would be deemed fit enough to begin tagging along on hunts, listening and learning from experience.
Throughout Lucian's hunts, it would become apparent the boy had a specialty when it came to killing vampires. This would lead the boy to be sent out on dangerous missions, for weeks at a time, for a single kill. Vampires were seclusive creatures, hard to track down due to their human appearance. It took great patience to lure out the creatures of the night, but it always led to a successful mission.
Eventually, the Vampire Lords themselves would take notice of the young Lucian's penchant for hunting their kind. This led to an emergency meeting of the Lords. Naturally, most of them couldn't stand each other, but their plight was evident. The hunter had to be dealt with before his power grew out of control. One Vampire Lord, Taelus, took the lead for the job.
Over the course of four months, Taelus would build an army of monsters, minions, and demons to lure the hunter into a trap. The plan was to whittle the hunter's strength away, so that if he made it to Taelus, the hunter wouldn't be able to win the fight. Once Taelus was prepared, he sent out a challenge to the hunter. The location was set to be an old, abandoned castle ruins. Lucian knew it was a trap, but accepted nonetheless.
Lucian knew this hunt would be his most difficult yet, so he emplyed some help in preparation. His fellow hunters imparted their greatest knowledge and tools to him. He would proceed prepared. The trek to the castle was wrought with horrors of the night, but Lucian's preparedness saw him through the enemies that tried to block his path. This eventually brought him to Taelus, whom was standing ready to face the Hunter.
The two fought brutally for the better part of the night, trading blow after blow. Eventually, however, Lucian was able to get the upper hand and drive his silver blade through the vampire's heart. The Vampire Lord had fallen. And to make sure the Vampire Lord wouldn't return, Lucian used the remains of his eternano to open a Spiral Shift into space, sucking in the body of the Vampire Lord. The portal would spit the corpse out in the direction of the sun. The Vampire Lords' numbers were now one less. Lucian, however, was tapped out. His eternano reserves were all but dried up, and he was physically worn, but alive and mostly un-injured. The trek back to the entrance of the castle was long, but uneventful. However, when Lucian would reach the entrance, another guest would be waiting for him.
This newcomer was another Vampire Lord, and introduced himself as such. He explained that he knew Taelus' plan would never succeed, so he devised a plan of his own. Wear Lucian down with the challenge, and then take him on himself. Lucian wouldn't listen to any more, and instead drew his sword once more.
The fight was vicious, but short lived. Lucian fought with purely his swordplay, and even though the sun was cresting over the horizon, the Vampire Lord had more than enough strength to send a clawed hand through Liam's gut. Before Lucian lost consciousness, the Vampire Lord had said that he was far from done with Liam. Not a few seconds later, Liam lost consciousness.
The Vampire Lord would keep Liam alive for a short time, studying the boy, trying to determine why he was such a force to be reckoned with against Vampires. However he was unable to find out why. The Lord wouldn't let this be a complete defeat, and instead turned the hunter into the very thing he hunted. Additionally, knowing Lucian would be able to remember how to revers ethe turning, as long as he didn't feed, the Lord wiped Lucian's memory, and bled him dry. This turned the hunter into a feral beast.
Lucian would be released in a town nearby the hunter's base of operations. This would allow any words of panic to reach them and react with quick efficiency. Once the hunter's had arrived, what was once Lucian would be dispatched quickly. None of Lucian's former comrades recognized the former hunter, as he had changed drastically since being turned. The Vampire Lord saw to that. The vampire, despite being new, matched a loose description to the Lord that Lucian had slain. Therefore, the hunters knew they had to take extra measures after they defeated it.
The hunters would take the fledgling vampire out, and knowing that he would just one day regenerate, deigned to shove silver stakes through the body and seal it inside a warded coffin, in a protected are of the catacombs beneath the church. The vampire would be forced into slumber as long as it remained within the coffin, the seals unbroken.
Over three-hundred years would pass after the vampire was warded and sealed. Monsters have become far less rampant, and humanity has prospered. The town and church laid in ruins, with the catacombs being mostly undisturbed, save for a few small vermin that had found their way in from outside.
One fateful day, a powerful earthquake would strike the region, disturbing a multitude of the ruins in the area. The earthquake would knock the coffin from its pedistal, breaking the warded seals. The vampire would start to awaken. The earthquake would also bring Archaeological Researchers wanting to study the area, for any new discoveries.
Over the course of three days, the researchers would discover the catacombs and begin to explore the area. Most of the contents had been undisturbed, but a few had fallen to the ground and broken. The researchers split up to explore the rest of the catacombs. Eventually, one would come across the coffin.
Upon opening the coffin, the researcher would discover a shriveled corpse. The sight was grisly, but ultimately it was found to just be a dead individual. After the shock and disgust subsided, the researcher noted the silver stakes, but nothing else of worth. They then pulled one out, examined it, and sat it back in the coffin, but not back in the body. Once the researcher had turned away to write their notes, the vampire struck.
The bite immediately paralyzed the researcher, allowing the vampire to begin sucking the prey dry. The researcher, being unable to scream, or make so much as a peep, couldn't alert their associates of what lie wait in these catacombs. Within moments, the researcher's shriveled corpse drops to the ground, completely drained of all blood in its body. The vampire, however, still hungered.
One by one, the researchers fell as the vampire tried to satiate over 300 years of thirst, but it was all for naught. Unaware of its own condition, one of the stakes still pierced the vampire, draining the blood out as quick as the vampire could drink. Its hunger would not be satiated this day.
Without a word form the researcher team, a rescue party would be dispatched to investigate. Without a clue as to where the researchers went, the rescue party would split up to investigate. Unfotunately for them the vampire had made its way into the city ruins. And again, one by one, to satiate its thirst, the vampire would strike. The rescue party was no match, as they had no idea what they were dealing with.
Soon after no word was received from the rescue team, a contract was put out to the mage guilds. Nobody knew where the researchers or rescue team went, or what had happened to them, so they needed people that could defend themselves. However, two solo mages took up the job, and the same thing happened to both. The guilds then deemed no solo mage would take up the job.
The next mages to take up the job were a duo from Blue Pegasus. By the time they had reached the ruins, it was night, clouds covering the moon, offering no light. They stuck close, and followed a blood trail to the vampire. Without waiting to see what it was, they attacked. The fight was fierce, but short lived, as the vampire was in its natural habitat, darkness. One of the mages was caught off guard, and met the same fate of those that came before. The other mage, witnessing what had happened, escaped. Soon after, rumors of a vampire spread. Regardless of the rumors, the threat level of the job now became a high-ranked affair.
One such individual whom had an interest in the rumors was Sabertooth's own master, Ulrik. He was a natural researcher, and couldn't pass up studying whatever was doing this to people. Ulrik took the job and headed to the ruins. It didn't take long to find the vampire. The trail of blood was easy enough to follow. Upon seeing the vampire, Ulrik's excitement skyrocketed.
However, before study could commence, the subject had to be subdued. The vampire was surprisingly skilled, albeit unrefined. Its berserk state was obviously an attribute to its current fighting state. The fight was long and intenese, but that was only due to Ulrik studying as he fought. Eventually, though. Ulrik was able to subdue the vampire into unconsciousness. Taking the vampire back to his lab in secret, the official story was that it was a rabbid beast, which has since been slain.
It didn't take long to find out what kept causing the rampant thirst. The stake still in the vampire was causing all blood to drain out. Upon removing the stake, and feeding some blood to the vampire, the wound healed. It didn't take long for the vampire to come back to sanity. However he had no memory of his life, except for that his name began with the letter 'L'.
The only issue left, was what the vampire was going to feed on. He couldn't feed off of humans, as that would eventually get him killed. That led Ulrik to developing an alchemized blood. Nutritionally, it was the same as human blood. And luckily, it could be made in abundance. The only tradeoff was that Ulrik wanted the vampire to join Sabertooth as a mage, so that he could further study. However, the vampire needed a name. After some talk, they both decided on the name 'Liam.'
Liam's vampiric nature was also going to be an issue, as his supernatural abilities would raise questions. Ulrik had found a way to artificially separate Liam's 'Vampire Soul' from his body, thus leaving it as a Take Over soul. Liam was glad for this, as it severely decreased his thirst, weakness to sunlight, and natural allure to humans. With everything set in place, Liam began life in Sabertooth. Within two years, he was the Sabertooth Ace. And a year later, he was brought into the ranks of the Aima, by none other than Ulrik himself.]
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XX▮-FULL NAME XXXXXEvie Toorima
XX▮-NICKNAME XXXXXEve
XX▮-MONIKER / TITLE XXXXXBlade Dancer
XX▮-VISUAL AGE XXXXX16
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XX▮-GENDER XXXXXFemale
XX▮-RELATIONSHIP STATUS XXXXXSingle pringle
XX▮-PERSONALITY XXXXXEvie is a barrel of joy most days, usually the most hyper active girl who says the most random things. She can change an entire conversation out of the blue to the most oddest one. Other days, she might keep to herself and enjoy her own alone time. Her personality changes a bit when she's upset, worried, or sick. Typically, she'll get quiet and end any conversations quickly, not even attempting to try and thats how anyone can tell if she's ever worried. She's usually the first to give up on hard tasks, because she feels all tries will just end up in failure anyway. Evie always trys her best to motivate others or be the one to cheer them up. She doesn't like seeing her friends so gloomy, so she tries her best to help. Theres no better feeling seeing your friends laughing after they've been crying!
Evie enjoys fighting but not necessarily getting down and dirty. She strives to improve every day, because you never know one day when you'll need to protect an innocent person or friend. On top of that, knowing you're getting stronger feels great! Another reason, is the goal of wanting to become a royal guard. She likes to try to give everyone a chance, so killing others is not a goal ever. Likewise, she tries her best to be friends with all she meets. As for arguments, she will flee first chance given as she hates to argue.
Evie is pretty sarcastic and cracks jokes whenever she thinks of a good one, even not during the best of times. She doesn't care if anyone tries to insult her cause words mean nothing to her. Plus she bounces back with positivity. When she's in a bad mood, she really isnt afraid of anything weather speaking her mind or smacking someone being an a**, plus she curses alot.
XX▮-LIKES .../1... Beaches .../2... Palm trees .../3... warm rainy days .../4... Saber family .../5... Sleeping in .../6... Decorating .../7... Singing .../8... Swords
XX▮-DISLIKES .../1... Waking up early .../2... Being around crowds of people .../3... Being yelled at .../4... Know it alls .../5... Bugs .../6... Gettin stared at
XX▮-FEARS / PHOBIAS XXXXXFalling from high heights / paranormal things / creepy crawlies
XX▮-PERSONAL GOAL / AMBITION XXXXXEvie's one true goal is to join the forces of the royal guard.
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XX▮-GUILD MARK LOCATION XXXXXTop of left hand
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xxxxx※Wave of destruction - Pulling forth one or two swords into the air; the user can cut the wind behind them before sending the sword(s) thrusting forward and creating a barrage of wind energy at there target in the form of a large tornado swirling sideways; it's not an actual tornado but a mini one. xxxxx※Steel King - A sword made of highly designed defense that looks like a thick silver sword resembling that of a large monstrous tooth, it's defense is so high that any high power spells lack the effort to break it. So far, it is known that it is not currently possible to break, or even so far as chip. However, this only is appropriate for an A rank and under. Any above ranks can very well destroy it.
xxxxx※Power of Flame - Creating a flame like sword orange sword, the sword becomes ablaze, which than causes the magic used with the weapon all to engulf in fire and burning heat waves, making all magic fire based, even the sword itself.
xxxxx※Power of ice - Forming a solid frozen blue sword with ice prickling out, it freezes the sword into a frozen popsicle, any spell used will become very bitterly cold and change the air around to freezing temperatures.
xxxxx※Stone sword - Releasing a steel stoned sword, it has the ability to transform into a very powerful sword, it grants capability to cut steel swords, brick walls, anything super strong that normally wouldn't break from a sword.
xxxxx※Windsore - Summoning some wind, a sword with a tornado forming around it appears, a blue outerface appearence. It creates high winds capable of pushing objects or foes backwards, even sending magic right back at the target. These winds can get as powerful as hurricane winds, when enough magic power is put to use.[
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xxxxx※Lightning blade - A heavy ranged attack that involves kicking off the ground with full force and then stabbing the sword into the ground, shooting out blue sparks in all directions. xxxxx※Magical reserve - A sword which is green and has images of a plus usually on first aid kits, it's very slender looking in appearance. It's purpose is meant for healing properties, it can heal a fully wounded person, mostly sevier. It also heals magical ailments, like poison or parylization.
xxxxx※Flashing explosion - A high powered charge skill that produces a sonic boom and looks like a comet as it bursts into the opponents. xxxxx※Bunnied - Appearing into one's hands, a blade releases resembling the image of a rabbit on the point, the tail being on the bottom. A blade to look similar to a rabbit, grants the user speed to move around any field in a quick way, running super fast but only as quick as a rabbit.
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XX▮-OCCUPATION XXXXXSword blacksmith
XX▮-BIOGRAPHY XXXXXEvie's original mother and father disowned her, after she started playing with swords at such an early age, and seeming to learn how to wield one so quickly. They sent her off to an orphanage, wanting no part in taking care of her further. The leader of a bandit dark guild took great interest in the child, and so he adopted her as one of his own. He trained her how to use swords and had her practice every single day. He even seemed to grow a bond with her, something he'd never shown or even felt before with anyone. Even towards the two sons he had, which became her brothers. Once Evie turned 11, she managed to transform into a sword, and her dad used her to fight off any who tried to attack his guild. Together, they fought. However, everything shifted horribly when the brother in which she's tried to understand for so long, Kumori, decided to kill her father. This took place after the death of their brother, Sebastion, and she wondered if that's why he went crazy. After that, their mother fled to who knows where, never to be seen again. Evie tried to ask Kumo why he did it, which resulted in him using a bullet against her to make her sleep.
Evie awoke to find a giant dragon nestled next to her, as if soothing her for all the pain and misguidance she was caused. The dragon vowed to watch over and protect her, as one of her own children. Her name was Crysalis, and together they grew up, and she taught her many dragon slaying abilities. Once she had taught all that she knew, she gave Evie a slight nudge to make her own destiny, and with that disappeared forever with a tearful goodbye. A mystery in where she went was shrouding the child, but she found a new forever home in Sabertooth, and there she would remain happy.
XX▮-RELATIONSHIPS XXXXXAdd as many as you desire, not limited to romantic .../1... Kumori | brother l still misses him despite his strange change in personality. .../2... .../3... .../4... .../5...
XX｡｡｡[NAME OF WIZARD THAT ACCOMPANIES FAMILIAR] XXXXX[Evie Toorima]
XX｡｡｡[BRIEF BIO] XXXXX[Evie knew Steele as a pony! They used to play together with sword fights, he was the only friend she had for a while. They grew up together, and were determined to stand by one anothers side, taking the world on as best friends. Now, they ride together and he is sometimes used during fights, though she is very careful for him not to become hurt, as she is very protective of her buddy!]
Posted: Mon Mar 23, 2020 8:26 am
Bunah
Profile Verdict • PENDING
After reviewing your profile, there are a few things that need to be looked at and touched up. Open the spoiler to see exactly what needs to be touched up.
✫ Blade Dragon Slayer Magic: Though you have been approved in your application to be a Blade Dragon Slayer, you have not provided the details about its magic in the Custom Magic and Custom Spells. These need to be added and approved before your character can get approved.
✫ Requip: Swordsman: This note will be a bit more since you have more customs to add-in. Your custom Requip for swords needs to be added in the Custom Weapons and its spells (if you're going to have them) will need to be in Custom Spells. The actual Requip need to be in Custom Magic These need to be added and approved before your character can get approved.
When these notes are edited/fixed, requote for another review.
Great the previous notes have been edited and look great! After reviewing again I did come across another set of things that needs to be reworked before your profile can be 100% approved.
xx[ Stats ] Your character's stats are perfectly allocated. However, there are stats that do not need to be there. Stamina as a stat no longer exists so that can be taken out which would also require you to re-allocate your stats.
xx[ Official Magic Pool ] With certain stats being able to raise your Magic Pool along with bonuses, please take another look at your MP and make sure it is up to date.
xx [ New Section For Weapons ] This one isn't actually a penalty against you. More like a heads up notice. Given that your Requip requires your character to have certain instruments for your spells, I have added a new section in the Character's Magic Info as per the Discord announcement. Please be sure to add that in as well when you make your edits.
When these edits are made you may requote me again for another review!
Great the previous notes have been edited and look great! After reviewing again I did come across another set of things that needs to be reworked before your profile can be 100% approved.
xx[ Stats ] Your character's stats are perfectly allocated. However, there are stats that do not need to be there. Stamina as a stat no longer exists so that can be taken out which would also require you to re-allocate your stats.
xx[ Official Magic Pool ] With certain stats being able to raise your Magic Pool along with bonuses, please take another look at your MP and make sure it is up to date.
xx [ New Section For Weapons ] This one isn't actually a penalty against you. More like a heads up notice. Given that your Requip requires your character to have certain instruments for your spells, I have added a new section in the Character's Magic Info as per the Discord announcement. Please be sure to add that in as well when you make your edits.
When these edits are made you may requote me again for another review!
