Rain panders to the new blood - A new D&D 4e game! CLOSED

[glitterboypilot]

Rain Yupa

You're not going to wait to see what everyone else thinks? You did ask for their input. All I did was give my reaction, and perhaps chuckle a bit IRL.

Yes, I AM going to wait, but there isn't a reason to keep them unfinished. I can always use them for future characters. In other games, hopefully

Besides, it is now three for the ranger. My brother and cat agree, let the cleric die.  

[Rain Yupa]

Rikku DarkHeart KH

Character Sheet: http://www.myth-weavers.com/sheet.html#id=888751

You're missing your 1 action point.

You didn't include your Barbarian Agility defensive bonuses, it looks like.

You didn't list your Rampage class ability. Don't forget that's a thing!

You're short a feat.

You don't have your attack or damage stats listed anywhere.

Hide's armor Bonus is only 3, not 4.

Your remaining gold is off by a lot. You've spent 60, you should have 740 remaining.

So far, that's what I see missing. I'll do a second pass when you tell me it's ready smile  

[Rain Yupa]

Well, I'm not going to audit a sheet unnecessarily. Let me know when you have a definite choice smile  

[Rikku DarkHeart KH]

Rain Yupa

k think i fixed everything sorry did that at like 1 am my time after being up for nearly 20 hours  

[SCN_ Grey_fox]

Artificer or fighter; My vote are for

Though, leaning towards the fighter  

[Rain Yupa]

Rain Yupa

Rikku DarkHeart KH

Character Sheet: http://www.myth-weavers.com/sheet.html#id=888751

You're missing your 1 action point.

You didn't include your Barbarian Agility defensive bonuses, it looks like.

You didn't list your Rampage class ability. Don't forget that's a thing!

You're short a feat.

You don't have your attack or damage stats listed anywhere.

Hide's armor Bonus is only 3, not 4.

Your remaining gold is off by a lot. You've spent 60, you should have 740 remaining.

So far, that's what I see missing. I'll do a second pass when you tell me it's ready smile

Your Barbarian Agility defense bonuses are... not listed, or wrong, I can't tell. Why do you have a +3 class bonus to AC? O.o

Rampage is still missing.

Still missing the attack/damage listing.

You sure you don't want to spend any of that gold? o_o  

[Rikku DarkHeart KH]

Rain Yupa

missing anything else?  

[Rain Yupa]

Rikku DarkHeart KH

Rain Yupa

missing anything else?

Still missing your Rampage class feature.

You still don't have your attack/damage listed/totaled sweatdrop

My recommendation is... well, here, look at one of my old sheets. See the attack and damage workspace on the right? And how I used those numbers plugged in to the left? It should have at least one of those two, but both is better. That way, the player and DM can easily see what values there are for quick reference, so neither has to figure it out each time. 3nodding

As for the gear, the "starting gold" listed in the first page says you can't have any magic items over level 1, and you have a level 3 magic item. It's intended for you guys to buy two level 1 items (say, magic greataxe and magic hide armor, or maybe an amulet of protection), but you don't HAVE to get two.  

[Rikku DarkHeart KH]

Rain Yupa

I think I got it and Im not going to spend the gold ill use it at a later date for something.  

[Rain Yupa]

Okay. You just need to throw in your damage workspace (which is basically, typing in 'str' so you have the +3 listed) and you're done, sans background!

Just waiting on an official word from glitterboypilot. He'd be all over it if he was a respectable SAMAS pilot, but noooo, he's holding us up with his giant unwieldy boom gun mad  

[Rikku DarkHeart KH]

Rain Yupa

Okay. You just need to throw in your damage workspace (which is basically, typing in 'str' so you have the +3 listed) and you're done, sans background!

Just waiting on an official word from glitterboypilot. He'd be all over it if he was a respectable SAMAS pilot, but noooo, he's holding us up with his giant unwieldy boom gun mad

lol ok  

[glitterboypilot]

Rain Yupa

Okay. You just need to throw in your damage workspace (which is basically, typing in 'str' so you have the +3 listed) and you're done, sans background!

Just waiting on an official word from glitterboypilot. He'd be all over it if he was a respectable SAMAS pilot, but noooo, he's holding us up with his giant unwieldy boom gun mad

Dwarf Fighter it is,

And have you seen a SAMAS take a hit? Not, pretty... KABOOM!!! scream  

[Rain Yupa]

glitterboypilot

Dwarven Fighter
http://www.myth-weavers.com/sheet.html#id=868847

Alas, there goes my chances of murdering Aqua's PC. sad

Audit time!

Why is your speed 4? Encumbered Speed, yo.

Your starting XP is 1000 smile

I calculate your HP at 41, not 44. Not sure if I missed something.

Your healing surges should be 1 higher, at 14.

Where did your 'Misc' bonus for Reflexes come from?

Your attack/damage workspace numbers are off slightly. Your attack is missing the +2 Proficiency bonus and +1 enhancement bonus. Your damage is missing the +1 enhancement bonus and +2 battlerager vigor bonus for chainmail/hammer. So it looks like you have the right attack bonus listed on the left, but your listed damage should be much higher.

Should be simple fixes, so let me know when you're good to go smile  

[glitterboypilot]

Rain Yupa

Where did your 'Misc' bonus for Reflexes come from?

PH page 213, Under "Shield Types"

...Shields grant a shield bonus to AC and Reflex...

the sheet wasn't adding it and didn't see a "Shield" slot. Am I wrong? That is it.  

[Rain Yupa]

Do me a favor and remove your shield bonus (below 'Quick Look Up'). Then add it in again. You should see both your AC and your Reflex change in response to the existence of a shield bonus smile