need tips and advice please

[Unnoticed Kouhai]

 

[felicia megumi]

the lines are kinda shaky sweatdrop the proportion of the anatomy is okay biggrin & try use some shading..that will be awesome 3nodding ..i'm also still learning to improve my drawings whee heart  

[felicia megumi]

please comment redface

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[False Demon]

Unnoticed Kouhai

I agree, some shadows would be perfect smile
The lineart is tolerable but I know you'd be
able to do better, so just keep drawing! biggrin

 

[False Demon]

felicia megumi

please comment redface

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gaia_kittenstar I like the details on her jacket gaia_kittenstar

 

[felicia megumi]

R a z v e d e l

felicia megumi

please comment redface

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gaia_kittenstar I like the details on her jacket gaia_kittenstar

thanks whee she's a doctor actually, wearing doctors; white coat.. wink  

[Kaori Silnaak]

The weak point is the anatomy. Not drawing the body before putting clothing on the figure makes it extremely difficult to identify where the pinch points are going to end up in the fabric to have them flow on the body more naturally.