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 Posted: Tue Jun 12, 2012 11:08 pm
Howdy Everyone!
So, I'm new to insomnia, and looking for things to do.
I write a bit of lyrics, like some others I'm sure, and would love you hear people's opinions, critiques, constructive criticisms.
If you're the same and have lyrics you don't mind sharing, please post!
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Posted: Tue Jun 12, 2012 11:14 pm
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Posted: Tue Jun 12, 2012 11:17 pm
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Posted: Tue Jun 12, 2012 11:20 pm
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Posted: Tue Jun 12, 2012 11:22 pm
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Posted: Tue Jun 12, 2012 11:24 pm
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Posted: Tue Jun 12, 2012 11:25 pm
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Posted: Tue Jun 12, 2012 11:31 pm
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Posted: Tue Jun 12, 2012 11:39 pm
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Posted: Sat Jun 23, 2012 1:53 pm
Heya!
I wrote some songs...at times...of extreme boredoom.
I've more on my USB, which is in Hungary...thousand miles away xD
But here's one from my dA...
Running these empty streets
I feel the rain on my face
Never knowing if right or wrong
Do I ever return?
Please hold me in your arms like never before.
Waking in a dream world
What is right and wrong?
Will I control it or not?
Yes yes yes!
I want want want it!
Go die go die, in my world,
This is my world
You are the devil, and she's my queen
I don't need you here, so just leave.
Even though I hate this part
When I wake up from a dream
I'm glad it's over, because it is just a dream
Not real
And here I come to make it real
Every time I see you
Every time I hear you
This is it, my world
My dream is real
Talking to you
This is it, I will die
With you in my arms
Come now with me to my wonderland
Be my queen of hearts
And let me be your joker
Ruling over the world together
My dearest lady of agony.
Clashing armies
Wild parties
Walking this golden road
Destroying cities
Leaving corpses
My dearest queen of hearts.
Come now here, this old funeral.
Remember him?
The one who took you away?
Revenge is the sweetest thing
Now he is underground
In the deep.
Please my queen, rule over this land
With your army of dead.
With power of thousands
Destroy them
You do not need them
Just you're Joker
He who speaks and loves
Not your king or prince.
Ride the dragon
Blew the blue fire
Burn the grass
Feel the brass
Through the flesh and skin
Oh the blood and gore!
No one needs me, but I need you.
So when I say I love you,
Believe me, please darling
Oh my dearest darling.
Every time I say they hate you, I speak the truth,
For that I love you.
And no one else does the same.
I'd give my heart, my soul to you
But you just ignore me.
Talk to him.
Not listen to me.
Let yourself be used.
And now I see you grown up.
With a family.
But he still doesn't love you.
You left me here, with a broken heart,
Left me here alone, in the dark of my heart.
But let my words be heard. . .
You are DEAD
With a bullet in the head
From a mistress
You got what you deserved
You will end in pain and agony
My lovely lady of death
Go to Hell
Enjoy it while it lasts
Because that one stupid a** will come
And save you, just to be left alone again.
I've been told by my friends that I have a style that would make lovely Vocaloid songs...yay...I guess...
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Posted: Sat Jun 23, 2012 1:54 pm
Here's another...
Stumbling in this graveyard
Digging up dead bodies
Not the best job on Earth
But this fits me, because I am
A demon, sent to kill everyone on this earth.
All the humans.
All the humans.
On this planet.
On this planet.
Kill everyone.
Kill everyone.
Even those kids.
Even those kids.
I am calling, calling them.
Into their death, because that is my job.
Stand by me, faithful friend and aid me.
Call me when in need
My wings are there for your aid
But return this favor or else
You will burn too.
You will burn too.
I will kill you.
I will kill you.
Spreading wings in the night sky.
Hearing screams on streets.
Flying by skyscrapers.
Collecting souls.
Scream for me.
For I am your end, sent to Earth to destroy your lives.
Hear me now.
I will avenge his death.
My love's death.
You humans killed him.
Now you will suffer, suffer from my rage.
You cannot run away or hide.
Pouring down rivers of red.
Hiding bodies in graveyards.
Digging new tombs for your bodies.
I have avenged him.
I can rest in peace
Because my mission is done
Return to Hell to my family
Family without father
But I can at least tell them it's okay.
He lives somewhere else.
Away from me.
Sailing through the night
Bidding your souls farewell,
Guiding them to me.
Beware us humans.
Beware us, for we are your end.
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