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 Posted: Fri Sep 16, 2011 6:09 pm
His voice is like from a fallen angel, so heavenly
Calling me so ever softly.
Makes me feel like I wanna fly
Engulfing me to cry.
My life is so disturb when you came
Do you feel the same?
My heart beats like a drum, as you came closer
It never beats this stronger.
My body is so numb
I seemed to be so dumb.
Smiling as you approach me
Thinking if you feel the same.
Trying to say I love you
But you said you love some—Who!!!
Asking me what you should do.
Now I just have to keep my feelings for you
‘Coz I know you will never feel the same
Makes me want to ask why you came.
I DON'T KNOW WHAT TITLE I SHOULD NAME MY POEM.
PLS. GUYS HELP ME OUT!!! gonk
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Posted: Fri Sep 16, 2011 7:09 pm
my secret sweet honey guardian angel.
does that work.
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Posted: Wed Sep 21, 2011 3:53 pm
[colro=darkturquoise]"His Wings Make Me Fly"?
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Posted: Fri Sep 23, 2011 4:58 pm
trying to say i love you or angelic love
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Posted: Mon Sep 26, 2011 12:28 am
Kawaii Yami Rorita my secret sweet honey guardian angel. does that work. Well that's a good one but it's sort of very sweet. sweatdrop
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Posted: Mon Sep 26, 2011 12:31 am
Half-Blood Elixor trying to say i love you or angelic love Trying to say I LOVE YOU.Is it too obvious? sweatdrop
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Posted: Mon Sep 26, 2011 4:41 pm
Uhhmm.... I know nothing about poetry, but how about "Tears of love"?
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Posted: Mon Sep 26, 2011 7:00 pm
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Posted: Mon Sep 26, 2011 9:16 pm
Ittarius Uhhmm.... I know nothing about poetry, but how about "Tears of love"? That's a bit awkward coz I don't cry so much for him. 3nodding heart
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Posted: Mon Sep 26, 2011 9:17 pm
Ummmmmmmmmm well that sort of great but it reflects that he's so bad. whee
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Posted: Tue Sep 27, 2011 11:26 am
well running out of ideas. Secret angel you decide .
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Posted: Tue Sep 27, 2011 3:21 pm
Xylar_08 Ittarius Uhhmm.... I know nothing about poetry, but how about "Tears of love"? That's a bit awkward coz I don't cry so much for him. 3nodding heart Fair enough. =P
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Posted: Tue Sep 27, 2011 8:39 pm
Ittarius Xylar_08 Ittarius Uhhmm.... I know nothing about poetry, but how about "Tears of love"? That's a bit awkward coz I don't cry so much for him. 3nodding heart Fair enough. =P It sure is. heart 3nodding
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Posted: Thu Sep 29, 2011 2:11 pm
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Posted: Sun Oct 02, 2011 7:10 am
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