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Essy ze Ninja Vice Captain
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 Posted: Wed Sep 13, 2017 3:22 pm
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Miss GryffindorK Characters Involved: William Bennett, Sawyer Holt, Olyvia Scott, Elliott Holt, Darcy Bennett, Marina Edgeworth, NPC Baddies Usernames of each character, respectively: Miss GryffindorK, Devlyn Maycry, Cara MiaKitty, Yukina101, The Forgotten Weasley Have each of the above listed members fully agreed to the following plot?: Indeed they have What is your plot idea? Please explain in great detail: Sawyer is hanging out at her aunt's sweet shop in Diagon, and Will comes in, searching for snacks, the two interact a bit when someone comes in with his friend. They mumble to themselves about the kids clearly being rich (referenced by Sawyer's armful of candy she's helping put away), then agree upon taking the kids for ransom. After making sure Olyvia's in the kitchen out of sight, they swipe the kids. Once they have them, they apparate them to a local house while they plan out a letter. The kids get tied up and set on a couch while they argue over a letter to get their money. Of course, as soon as the parents/family realize the kids are missing, the Aurors are on the case, leading to the safe rescue of both kids and the arrest of the bad guys. When do you plan for this idea to go into effect? This summer What are the idea's drawbacks? (e.g. Does anyone get killed? Is Hogwarts going to have to suffer? etc.) The kids will be shook up, the parents/families will be incredibly angry Why are you interested in doing this idea? it gives logical reason to their later begrudging friendship. Anything else you would like to share about this idea? It'll be an almost stupidly easy capture and rescue
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I'm all for kidnappings and ransom, but there needs to be a little more of a justifiable reason for the children to be deemed rich and ransom worthy besides an "armful of candy". Ransom kidnappings aren't usually done at random. There's typically a bit more research and planning in that regard. Did the bad guys overhear the kids names? Maybe they know their wizarding gossip and recognize the maternal side from each child (Jane and Verily) to come from super rich and influential families? Are the kids decked to the nine's in expensive clothes, jewelry, with pouches of galleons that they're waving around? Maybe they personally know one of the families, then happened upon the kids' and knew the risk would be worth the reward; instead of just guessing or hoping it is. Regardless, there just needs to be another sentence or two with a bit more reasoning on the motive for the "why" instead of (what I interpret as) "because they're stupid bad guys". I mean, unless they are really stupid bad guys, in which case, just mention their stupidity by highlighting that they totally didn't do any research because they never do and that's why they get caught in the first place. |
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Posted: Wed Sep 13, 2017 5:48 pm
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**Edited and Resubmitted
Characters Involved: William Bennett, Sawyer Holt, Olyvia Scott, Michael McHalen, Elliott Holt, Darcy Bennett, Marina Edgeworth, NPC Baddies
Usernames of each character, respectively: Miss GryffindorK, Devlyn Maycry, Cara MiaKitty, Yukina101, The Forgotten Weasley
Have each of the above listed members fully agreed to the following plot?: Indeed they have
What is your plot idea? Please explain in great detail: Sawyer is hanging out at her aunt's sweet shop in Diagon, and Will comes in, searching for snacks, the two interact a bit when someone comes in with his friend. After watching Sawyer bid goodbye to her grandpa (the known head of the McHalen Family), and hear Will mention his surname with greeting Sawyer, they decide to take the kids for ransom, since the McHalen and Bennett families are noted as wealthy in magical society. After making sure Olyvia's in the kitchen out of sight, they swipe the kids. Once they have them, they apparate them to a local house while they plan out a letter. The kids get tied up and set on a couch while they argue over a letter to get their money. Of course, as soon as the parents/family realize the kids are missing, the Aurors are on the case, leading to the safe rescue of both kids and the arrest of the bad guys.
When do you plan for this idea to go into effect? This summer
What are the idea's drawbacks? (e.g. Does anyone get killed? Is Hogwarts going to have to suffer? etc.) The kids will be shook up, the parents/families will be incredibly angry
Why are you interested in doing this idea? it gives logical reason to their later begrudging friendship.
Anything else you would like to share about this idea? It'll be an almost stupidly easy capture and rescue
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Essy ze Ninja Vice Captain
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Posted: Wed Sep 13, 2017 5:51 pm
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Miss GryffindorK **Edited and Resubmitted Characters Involved: William Bennett, Sawyer Holt, Olyvia Scott, Michael McHalen, Elliott Holt, Darcy Bennett, Marina Edgeworth, NPC Baddies Usernames of each character, respectively: Miss GryffindorK, Devlyn Maycry, Cara MiaKitty, Yukina101, The Forgotten Weasley Have each of the above listed members fully agreed to the following plot?: Indeed they have What is your plot idea? Please explain in great detail: Sawyer is hanging out at her aunt's sweet shop in Diagon, and Will comes in, searching for snacks, the two interact a bit when someone comes in with his friend. After watching Sawyer bid goodbye to her grandpa (the known head of the McHalen Family), and hear Will mention his surname with greeting Sawyer, they decide to take the kids for ransom, since the McHalen and Bennett families are noted as wealthy in magical society. After making sure Olyvia's in the kitchen out of sight, they swipe the kids. Once they have them, they apparate them to a local house while they plan out a letter. The kids get tied up and set on a couch while they argue over a letter to get their money. Of course, as soon as the parents/family realize the kids are missing, the Aurors are on the case, leading to the safe rescue of both kids and the arrest of the bad guys. When do you plan for this idea to go into effect? This summer What are the idea's drawbacks? (e.g. Does anyone get killed? Is Hogwarts going to have to suffer? etc.) The kids will be shook up, the parents/families will be incredibly angry Why are you interested in doing this idea? it gives logical reason to their later begrudging friendship. Anything else you would like to share about this idea? It'll be an almost stupidly easy capture and rescue
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Posted: Sun Oct 01, 2017 11:08 am
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Characters Involved: Clarisse family, Jacob Drage, Clarice Steele, Megan Steele, Garret Drage
Usernames of each character, respectively: Diamond Wales, murruelecreuset
Have each of the above listed members fully agreed to the following plot?: Yes
What is your plot idea? Please explain in great detail: Jacob has taken his half-sister out for a bit, figuring on spending some quality time with her during the summer months since he doesn't see her that often. During their trip out and about, they run across David Clarisse and his family. The two decide to hang out and talk for a while, since they rarely get to do it with work. However, the day is interrupted when Megan and Garret make an appearance. Megan has decided that she's reclaiming her daughter since she was taken from her years ago, and Garret is assisting. The two aurors start duelling with them until Megan manages to kill both of David's parents and Garret grabs Clarice. When they disapparate, Jacob and David are left trying to clean up the mess caused by the incident, and Jacob decides that there is no way that Megan can be successfully taken into custody and if the aurors have any chance of stopping her and Garret, they'd have to kill her.
When do you plan for this idea to go into effect? Soon, like during this summer month.
What are the idea's drawbacks? (e.g. Does anyone get killed? Is Hogwarts going to have to suffer? etc.) David's parents die, Clarice is kidnapped and never seen at Hogwarts again.
Why are you interested in doing this idea? One, to reduce the number of OWLs I'm taking next year, and two, because Murrue wanted to have something tragic happen to the Clarisses and this is what we decided on. This also will end up starting the events that result in Megan's death and Garret's arrest.
Anything else you would like to share about this idea? Nope, nada.
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The Forgotten Weasley Crew
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Posted: Sun Oct 01, 2017 11:35 am
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Diamond Wales Characters Involved: Clarisse family, Jacob Drage, Clarice Steele, Megan Steele, Garret Drage Usernames of each character, respectively: Diamond Wales, murruelecreuset Have each of the above listed members fully agreed to the following plot?: Yes What is your plot idea? Please explain in great detail: Jacob has taken his half-sister out for a bit, figuring on spending some quality time with her during the summer months since he doesn't see her that often. During their trip out and about, they run across David Clarisse and his family. The two decide to hang out and talk for a while, since they rarely get to do it with work. However, the day is interrupted when Megan and Garret make an appearance. Megan has decided that she's reclaiming her daughter since she was taken from her years ago, and Garret is assisting. The two aurors start duelling with them until Megan manages to kill both of David's parents and Garret grabs Clarice. When they disapparate, Jacob and David are left trying to clean up the mess caused by the incident, and Jacob decides that there is no way that Megan can be successfully taken into custody and if the aurors have any chance of stopping her and Garret, they'd have to kill her. When do you plan for this idea to go into effect? Soon, like during this summer month. What are the idea's drawbacks? (e.g. Does anyone get killed? Is Hogwarts going to have to suffer? etc.) David's parents die, Clarice is kidnapped and never seen at Hogwarts again. Why are you interested in doing this idea? One, to reduce the number of OWLs I'm taking next year, and two, because Murrue wanted to have something tragic happen to the Clarisses and this is what we decided on. This also will end up starting the events that result in Megan's death and Garret's arrest. Anything else you would like to share about this idea? Nope, nada. Formatted by Gaia.Upgrade
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Posted: Tue Oct 03, 2017 8:25 pm
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Characters Involved: Tyler Blade, Paul Blade (NPC)
Usernames of each character, respectively: Red Hot Missy
Have each of the above listed members fully agreed to the following plot?: I think so?
What is your plot idea? Please explain in great detail: Paul just recently got out of prison on good behavior. He decided to go to his brother to have a place to stay, but his brother flat out tells him no. However, during this whole incident, Tyler had owled his uncle about school and such and Paul, knowing Hogwarts from Jesse when he was a kid, figures out that Tyler is his son and that he's attending the same school that Jesse attended. As a result, Paul decides to get back at his brother the only way he knows how, by kidnapping Tyler when he got off the train at King's Cross. Deciding that being in England was too much of a risk, he decides to head to another country, ensuring that Tyler can't just escape and make it back to England. When the next school year rolls around, Tyler is pretty conspicuous only because of his total absence from school, as Paul has made sure that Tyler is unable to make contact with anyone that might know him.
When do you plan for this idea to go into effect? As soon as possible considering that the plot should be starting right now.
What are the idea's drawbacks? (e.g. Does anyone get killed? Is Hogwarts going to have to suffer? etc.) Tyler is kidnapped, Paul takes him out of the country, and Tyler can't attend Hogwarts next school year.
Why are you interested in doing this idea? Mostly to kill off Paul eventually.
Anything else you would like to share about this idea? This is part one, part two will be posted as soon as I figure out all the details.
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The Forgotten Weasley Crew
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Posted: Tue Oct 03, 2017 8:31 pm
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Red Hot Missy Characters Involved: Tyler Blade, Paul Blade (NPC) Usernames of each character, respectively: Red Hot Missy Have each of the above listed members fully agreed to the following plot?: I think so? What is your plot idea? Please explain in great detail: Paul just recently got out of prison on good behavior. He decided to go to his brother to have a place to stay, but his brother flat out tells him no. However, during this whole incident, Tyler had owled his uncle about school and such and Paul, knowing Hogwarts from Jesse when he was a kid, figures out that Tyler is his son and that he's attending the same school that Jesse attended. As a result, Paul decides to get back at his brother the only way he knows how, by kidnapping Tyler when he got off the train at King's Cross. Deciding that being in England was too much of a risk, he decides to head to another country, ensuring that Tyler can't just escape and make it back to England. When the next school year rolls around, Tyler is pretty conspicuous only because of his total absence from school, as Paul has made sure that Tyler is unable to make contact with anyone that might know him. When do you plan for this idea to go into effect? As soon as possible considering that the plot should be starting right now. What are the idea's drawbacks? (e.g. Does anyone get killed? Is Hogwarts going to have to suffer? etc.) Tyler is kidnapped, Paul takes him out of the country, and Tyler can't attend Hogwarts next school year. Why are you interested in doing this idea? Mostly to kill off Paul eventually. Anything else you would like to share about this idea? This is part one, part two will be posted as soon as I figure out all the details.
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Posted: Tue Oct 03, 2017 8:45 pm
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****Addition to Earlier Plot request {Because I missed a detail}
Characters Involved: William Bennett, Sawyer Holt, NPC Baddies
Usernames of each character, respectively: Miss GryffindorK, Devlyn Maycry
Have each of the above listed members fully agreed to the following plot?: Indeed they have
What is your plot idea? Please explain in great detail: While being held by their kidnappers, Will and Sawyer are going to get roughed up a bit, including bruises, small cuts, and a bit of terror. This is until the ransom letters go out, and they are rescued, as mentioned in the earlier plot request.
When do you plan for this idea to go into effect? right now
What are the idea's drawbacks? (e.g. Does anyone get killed? Is Hogwarts going to have to suffer? etc.) The kids will be a bit injured, but will otherwise end up fine, maybe a minor bit of healing at most.
Why are you interested in doing this idea? because I forgot to write it in the last request.
Anything else you would like to share about this idea? sorry, I thought I'd mentioned it last time. @_@
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The Forgotten Weasley Crew
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Posted: Tue Oct 03, 2017 8:48 pm
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Miss GryffindorK ****Addition to Earlier Plot request {Because I missed a detail} Characters Involved: William Bennett, Sawyer Holt, NPC Baddies Usernames of each character, respectively: Miss GryffindorK, Devlyn Maycry Have each of the above listed members fully agreed to the following plot?: Indeed they have What is your plot idea? Please explain in great detail: While being held by their kidnappers, Will and Sawyer are going to get roughed up a bit, including bruises, small cuts, and a bit of terror. This is until the ransom letters go out, and they are rescued, as mentioned in the earlier plot request. When do you plan for this idea to go into effect? right now What are the idea's drawbacks? (e.g. Does anyone get killed? Is Hogwarts going to have to suffer? etc.) The kids will be a bit injured, but will otherwise end up fine, maybe a minor bit of healing at most. Why are you interested in doing this idea? because I forgot to write it in the last request. Anything else you would like to share about this idea? sorry, I thought I'd mentioned it last time. @_@
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The Forgotten Weasley Crew
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Posted: Mon Oct 09, 2017 7:09 am
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Kungfudemoness Characters Involved: Charlie Antúnez, Gertrude Adelwood, and Gabby Stanford Usernames of each character, respectively: Kungfudemoness, murruelecreuset Have each of the above listed members fully agreed to the following plot?: yuppers What is your plot idea? Please explain in great detail: Charlie was raised by his mom with his father being out of the picture. As Charlie get older he wants to know why his father didn't want to be part of the family it starts nagging him a bit as he enters teenhood. With a name from his mom, Charlie, Gertie, and Gabby do research into old student records to find more about him. During summer they do a deeper search to find an address. At this point Charlie gets to confront his father and learn he left because Charlie had been an unwelcome surprise. Afterward Charlie is going to be pretty angry sad and some low self esteem. Gertie and Gabby help him out and he learns the true meaning of family. [Brought to you by lifetime movie network] When do you plan for this idea to go into effect? fall 2039 to summer 2040 What are the idea's drawbacks? (e.g. Does anyone get killed? Is Hogwarts going to have to suffer? etc.) Charlie has to adult and accept that his dad just doesn't want him and that doesn't make him any less of a person... Gertie and Gabby have to cheer up a sad Charlie Why are you interested in doing this idea? Basically, want to get the whole who's my daddy thing all wrapped up so Charlie can move on. He'll be more confident by the end. Anything else you would like to share about this idea? nope
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Posted: Wed Nov 08, 2017 12:37 pm
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Characters Involved: Asteria Frey, Pamela Gautreaux, Lorelei Townsend, Gianna Donati, Zephyros Whitethorne, Carver Bryson, Matilda Collins, Cordelia Quimby-Winthrop, Avian Lovette
Usernames of each character, respectively: The Forgotten Weasley, Cara MiaKitty, Yukina101, Diamond Wales, Red Hot Missy, Summer II, kiska166, Julian Galaksylph
Have each of the above listed members fully agreed to the following plot?: Yes.
What is your plot idea? Please explain in great detail: Pamsteria's gettin' hitched at Lori's giantarse mansion in Spring 2040 and then they're having a raucous party.
When do you plan for this idea to go into effect? Spring 2040
What are the idea's drawbacks? (e.g. Does anyone get killed? Is Hogwarts going to have to suffer? etc.) Literally none unless you hate all that is good and pure in this world.
Why are you interested in doing this idea? Because they want to make their love to last the ages official and would like to start a family together down the line. Also come on. It's gonna be great.
Anything else you would like to share about this idea? Aster's rocking a stylin' wedding suit.
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Posted: Fri Nov 10, 2017 5:22 pm
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The Forgotten Weasley Characters Involved: Asteria Frey, Pamela Gautreaux, Lorelei Townsend, Gianna Donati, Zephyros Whitethorne, Carver Bryson, Matilda Collins, Cordelia Quimby-Winthrop, Avian Lovette Usernames of each character, respectively: The Forgotten Weasley, Cara MiaKitty, Yukina101, Diamond Wales, Red Hot Missy, Summer II, kiska166, Julian Galaksylph Have each of the above listed members fully agreed to the following plot?: Yes. What is your plot idea? Please explain in great detail: Pamsteria's gettin' hitched at Lori's giantarse mansion in Spring 2040 and then they're having a raucous party. When do you plan for this idea to go into effect? Spring 2040 What are the idea's drawbacks? (e.g. Does anyone get killed? Is Hogwarts going to have to suffer? etc.) Literally none unless you hate all that is good and pure in this world. Why are you interested in doing this idea? Because they want to make their love to last the ages official and would like to start a family together down the line. Also come on. It's gonna be great. Anything else you would like to share about this idea? Aster's rocking a stylin' wedding suit.
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Posted: Sat Jan 06, 2018 9:23 am
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Characters Involved: Brenden Stanford, Tiffany Adelwood, Gertrude Adelwood, Gabriella Stanford, Matthew Stanford, Cydney Ellis... the Stanford, Wakefield, Abrams, Findlay-Abrams, and Ellis families in full force
Usernames of each character, respectively: murruelecreuset, Miss GryffindorK, Yukina101
Have each of the above listed members fully agreed to the following plot?: Yes indeed
What is your plot idea? Please explain in great detail: There shall be a wedding. Tiff and Brenden are getting married. The family will clap and cheer... it will be glorious
When do you plan for this idea to go into effect? Late summer 2040
What are the idea's drawbacks? (e.g. Does anyone get killed? Is Hogwarts going to have to suffer? etc.) There are none
Why are you interested in doing this idea? They're gonna have a baby, so they probably better tie the knot... oh and true love and all.
Anything else you would like to share about this idea? Not really.
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Posted: Sat Jan 06, 2018 9:53 am
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Characters Involved: Chalmes Whitethorne, Chance Whitethorne, Lilah Whitethorne
Usernames of each character, respectively: Diamond Wales, Devlyn Maycry
Have each of the above listed members fully agreed to the following plot?: Yes
What is your plot idea? Please explain in great detail: Chalmes takes Lilah and Chance out to go shopping while Elli is at home watching Lillith and Kory, who are sick. Unfortunately, the three run into a man who decides to try and mug them. Chalmes moves to try and keep his kids safe, but is stabbed for his efforts. Unfortunately for him, he doesn't survive.
When do you plan for this idea to go into effect? As soon as it's accepted.
What are the idea's drawbacks? (e.g. Does anyone get killed? Is Hogwarts going to have to suffer? etc.) Chalmes is killed, and well, it hits the Whitethorne family hard, in particular his children and twin.
Why are you interested in doing this idea? I've been planning for this to happen since well... it's been a LONG time coming.
Anything else you would like to share about this idea? Please? *puppy eyes*
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