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Is this considered poetry?

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Boys Chore

PostPosted: Thu Jun 09, 2011 11:47 pm


"I'm standing on the edge of an eight story building,
looking down at the passing cars and passers-by.
They look so small and I feel like God.
What waits for me at the bottom is peace and happiness.
I'm gonna jump I'll be free..."


I usually write down my imaginations and turn them into poems. What do you think?
PostPosted: Thu Jun 09, 2011 11:55 pm


If ypur thpughts are suicide, you may want to try seeking help.

All in all though, the poem is good.

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PostPosted: Fri Jun 10, 2011 12:25 am


You know you're in love when you can't fall asleep...


Yep. It's called prose.


...because reality is finally better than your dreams...
PostPosted: Sat Jun 11, 2011 4:21 pm


This looks like something that belongs in "Art"

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