Nit Pick my Art

[Sleeb]

I just got a Wacom, so have been drawing up a storm. I just recently lost my work I liked as much as the one I'm going to post first here.



My main concern here is her legs and hips. Her hand on the door is also too small. And Its my first attempt at adding an environment, so any red on the door would be nice. Basically, pick this apart. She is dying, so her skin is supposed to be ashen.  

[Little Kurayami]

I can see, your problem. But I can't take you up seriously cause I'm laughing my butt off now. You see when I got my wacom I did a lot worse.
You see, it's good but with practise it can get even better. Only hope you have more luck then I did.  

[Sleeb]

Little Kurayami

I can see, your problem. But I can't take you up seriously cause I'm laughing my butt off now. You see when I got my wacom I did a lot worse.
You see, it's good but with practice it can get even better. Only hope you have more luck then I did.

I was surprised myself, its better than I can do on paper.  

[Errol McGillivray]

Read the forum guides and post in the correct place.

Thank you.