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 Posted: Fri Mar 18, 2011 1:56 pm
Feedback Exchange
Feedback helps people notice flaws they didn't initially see. Edits are a lot easier to make early on, so I thought it would be nice to have a sort of feedback exchange in the interest of producing the best work we can :3
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If you choose to participate...
-Post your image. It doesn't matter how far or early along you are.
-Please be kind enough to come back sometime and offer suggestions to others. (Keep in mind that older posts may be completed, so it may be best to focus on those more recently posted.)
-Try to keep criticism constructive. We're all here to improve, so there's no need to be mean or impolite.
-Likewise, try not to be offended when suggestions are offered. Most people are not aiming to hurt feelings.
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Posted: Fri Mar 18, 2011 2:26 pm
 Her legs gave me a hard time :I
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Posted: Tue Mar 22, 2011 5:53 am
oh nice idea : D I really support the idea of constructive criticism and not being mean about it : 3 I'll have to post an image later on : 3
Now for your drawing : ) I think you did a lovely job so far! I love the details you put into the cloths, and I'm really anxious to see how your chandelier will come out. ^-^ But so far its looking awesome. One thing I'd like to point out however is your figures. I kinda get the impression your not quite sure what you want to do with them because of the perspective you gave one, compared to the other. Her first hand on her head looks ok, I'd just be carefull about the fingure sizes, it looks a little like your pinky fingure is longer than your middle fingure, so maybe just look out for that. (the pinky size looks ok I would try maybe enlarging the rest of the fingures to compensate : 3 ). The second hand is were the most confusion is created. The arm is really nicely drawn, the position fits perfectly with the perspective of the body, however the hand it self looks like were viewing it from another angle. I think this is because of the way you placed your lines for your figures. I can see what position you were trying to give it... which would work splendidly as well : 3 you just need to ajust a few things so that it looks like that. So I'd like to point out the fingure closest to us. Notice how the way the lines were drawn we get the impression that, the fingure closest to use is the characters longest fingure... but actually if you look at the placement of her body, and her hands vs. the body you'd noticed that, her closest fingure to us is her pinky fingure (which is the smallest fingure on our hand) so I think if you made that fingure a little smaller, and gave her a thumb you could improve your drawing : 3
One other small remark. Is the legs.... I know they took you a long time, so first off, congrats to sticking to it and trying to make it work >; 3 !!!! You did an excellent job. The leg size looks pretty close to preportional, the only problem I can see, is these are the preportions she's supposed to have if she's not wearing heels. : 3 If you erase her heels and redraw her foot in the same position but in a flat foot position this will work great : )
However if you'd like to keep the heels, I recommend you try redrawing the hole foot, with the ankles touching the ground, the top foot goinging slightly into the ground, and add your heels afterwards(so you'll basicaly draw your characters heels tooching the ground were the heels are right now, and elongate the foots apperance) Mainly cause thats what heels do they elongate our legs, But what you did was already good, its just her foot needs to touche the ground to be preportionate I think : 3.
Your drawing looks wounderfull so far, and I really can't wait to see the end result : D !!! Good luck
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