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 Posted: Tue Jan 31, 2006 12:59 am
Half Empty, Half Full
People may
Have a glass
That is
Half empty
Or half full
Two glasses
One half empty
One half full
Are you sure
That both
Arn't whole
For their are
Two glasses
Like light
And dark
Put them
Together
To have one
Equal part
Is your glass
Half empty
Or half full
It ain't hard
To tell.
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Gothic Life
Tormented
Desperate and alone
No one cares
About me
Anymore
Lost in the void
Lost in the darkness
Lost within the depression
Of life lost
Truth be told
I don't really care
For I'm
Not really there
Invisible by all
Invisible by myself
I'm just a figment
Of all
Solitude
Loneliness
These are my friends
They are the only ones
I can ******** all the rest
I do not care
Who gives a ******** I'm not really there
Sweet bitterness
Deception
And lies
Its all sweet music
To my mind
Illusions
Fantasies
Love
And desires
These are nothing
But false hopes
As I bid you
Adieu
I leave you
With a ******** You
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Posted: Sun Feb 12, 2006 9:44 am
Awesome! Here is one of mine:
I am sitting here,
writing this,
blood spilling,
from my wrists.
You dont know what its like,
'cause he cheated,
he lied.
This is my destiny,
this is my ride,
so ******** you,
and goodbye.
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Posted: Mon Feb 13, 2006 6:09 pm
i love the second poem... it gives me so much inspiration!
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Posted: Wed Feb 15, 2006 12:40 pm
I dont like ur poll cuz it says either 1 or both r ok BUT i think both of them r GREAT!!!!!!
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Posted: Thu Feb 23, 2006 12:46 am
I thought they were both good.
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