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 Posted: Tue Feb 08, 2011 11:59 pm
  I'm drawing this for my friend b-day present and I need help somethings off gonk
WIP- the sketch
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Posted: Wed Feb 09, 2011 12:41 pm
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Posted: Wed Feb 09, 2011 12:43 pm
i think youll need to sketch it some more so we can more easily distinguish it you know what I mean? otherwise, make many mini pics of it and choose one of them. then it migth be easier to find what feels odd?
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Posted: Wed Feb 09, 2011 12:51 pm
Zolah i think youll need to sketch it some more so we can more easily distinguish it you know what I mean? otherwise, make many mini pics of it and choose one of them. then it migth be easier to find what feels odd?
this is normally all I sketch out before lining it >< but I'll keep working at it
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Posted: Wed Feb 09, 2011 1:48 pm
the branch should continue ^^ other then that its good smile
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Posted: Wed Feb 09, 2011 6:47 pm
what is it... D:
I mean, it's really cute, but I can't really "distinguish it" yet, like another person mentioned.
emo
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Posted: Wed Feb 09, 2011 7:22 pm
I think the problem here is were not really sure what he's body is doing... we have a hard time deciphering what angle your creatures body is placed. If you can tell me what position your creature is in, maybe I can help you with some red lines 3nodding
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Posted: Wed Feb 09, 2011 10:41 pm
Mango Turd what is it... D: I mean, it's really cute, but I can't really "distinguish it" yet, like another person mentioned. emo
...its a sloth >< and she's suppose to be laying on a table
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Posted: Wed Feb 09, 2011 10:44 pm
Kai_Chi I think the problem here is were not really sure what he's body is doing... we have a hard time deciphering what angle your creatures body is placed. If you can tell me what position your creature is in, maybe I can help you with some red lines 3nodding
She's suppose to be leaning with her head against her arms on a table.... and she's a sloth >< I guess I'm failing horribly at then entire thing XP
if you can help me at all fix it I would be eternally greatfull
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Posted: Wed Feb 09, 2011 11:02 pm
Lshmah the branch should continue ^^ other then that its good smile
thankyou I'll make sure the table comes out farther. *she's laying on the edge of a table*
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Posted: Wed Feb 09, 2011 11:31 pm
needs more table implyed, and lazyness
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Posted: Thu Feb 10, 2011 2:04 am
Hoshioni needs more table implyed, and lazyness ....how the hell do I make it seem even more lazy???
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Posted: Thu Feb 10, 2011 2:07 am
So I was taking into account some of the things that you all suggested and this ended up as my end result but I'm not sure I'm happy with it yet or not...I know I can do better ><Tequila
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Posted: Fri Feb 11, 2011 9:29 am
Hmmm I think you might be able to improve it : ), but I do hand it to you, a sloths anatomy is very... particular XD I checked out a few sloths on google... and yea there arms seem pretty funky XD haha.... They don't seem to fold/bend like a human arm I think the main problem your having with your sketch is the arm... and I think this may be due to the fact that your arm was to human like, it folded to much like a normal humans arm would fold, and had a pointed elbow like a human. I may be off on this, but from what I could tell from my quick little search *cause I will admit, I've never really studied sloths before XD * there arms look more large on the top half and become more smaller as we get closer to the claws or if there fully grown sloth there wrist become a little smaller then there uper arm but the size stays pretty constant through out the hole arm : 3 I did a red line... I'm not to sure how helpfull this will be, like I said I'm really not that familier on sloths and the way there bodies work...but this would be my best guess http://i55.tinypic.com/vd3hnb.jpg
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Posted: Sun Feb 13, 2011 10:25 pm
Kai_Chi Hmmm I think you might be able to improve it : ), but I do hand it to you, a sloths anatomy is very... particular XD I checked out a few sloths on google... and yea there arms seem pretty funky XD haha.... They don't seem to fold/bend like a human arm I think the main problem your having with your sketch is the arm... and I think this may be due to the fact that your arm was to human like, it folded to much like a normal humans arm would fold, and had a pointed elbow like a human. I may be off on this, but from what I could tell from my quick little search *cause I will admit, I've never really studied sloths before XD * there arms look more large on the top half and become more smaller as we get closer to the claws or if there fully grown sloth there wrist become a little smaller then there uper arm but the size stays pretty constant through out the hole arm : 3 I did a red line... I'm not to sure how helpfull this will be, like I said I'm really not that familier on sloths and the way there bodies work...but this would be my best guess http://i55.tinypic.com/vd3hnb.jpg thank you so much for he imput I'll see what i can do about finxing the arms some more and the back heart
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