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Dyohna

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Posted: Fri Feb 04, 2011 7:03 pm

I did a request for my friend, well, not really, I kinda asked to do it.
Not the point!
I want to give this pic of her avi to her and I've never tried a pose like this. Tell me what I did wrong! Help me out please, I really want to get better at different poses.
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I took off the red stuff...
~Thank You~

Posted: Sat Feb 05, 2011 9:00 am

Hm, next time I might suggest that the hand she has underneath the umbrella handle be on top ( but that's just cause that's how I would hold an umbrella, so it's not really a big deal x D ). I like how you drew the hand in front, her eyes and the top of the umbrella itself. Cute pose. : )

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Dyohna

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Posted: Sat Feb 05, 2011 2:50 pm

o3o
Oh, thats it? blaugh I thought I did alot worse...
My friend holds her umbrella like that when she's bored.
Thank you!

Posted: Sat Feb 05, 2011 4:58 pm

No problem. If you see something in your art that you personally don't like you know it's always fun to mess around with things and see how things turn out differently, but yeah I like it! : )

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Dyohna

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Posted: Sat Feb 05, 2011 5:13 pm

Hmmmmmmmmmmmmmm, I notice that her right pigtail doesn't look like its attached to her head............... neutral
I should probably fix that... but I won't! :3

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