Poem.

[Rainbow Bracelets II]

So I've been maybe sorta trying to start writing poetry. And I want to know what you guys think.
I showed Ryan, his opinion was too many big words and he had no idea what it was about and basically he hated it. emo
I personally like it a lot.
Anyway...I'll just post it here. Be nice plz.

Lipidnousness.
The taste fixation on a mouth that has seductive
smiles dancing and depraved intentions lingering.
Discount tears mixed with sweat- coalesce emanation.
The peculiar urge to mingle with the past.
Unbuttoning with fingertips. Physically. Noetically.
Prophetic lullaby sang zealously, with vacuous promise.
Ominous climax.

So yeah tell me what you think it's about..if you don't know big words look them up I guess or just don't try. talk2hand

inb4 its all about sex thats all stfu
or emoemoemo  

[faint old rhyme]

I liked it.
Even though I didn't get all the words. >.>;  

[Rainbow Bracelets II]

faint old rhyme

I liked it.
Even though I didn't get all the words. >.>;

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