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 Posted: Thu Jan 21, 2010 4:50 pm
Life is like a box of chocolates
Filled with bloody filling stuff
And I can't
Help
But
Hate Myself
And I take the knife to my heart
Stabbing Pain
Just to feel alive
I slit my wrists
Watch the blood gush
Deep Crimson
Like the forbidden fruit
I am drawn to it
Will I take a bite?
I hate this
And no-
...
That first line just made me want chocolate
I really want chocolate
Holy s**t
Now I'm just thinking about Chocolate
OH NO NEVERMIND WAIT
I can still be dark
Bats swirl around me
Like some horrific carousel
I'm lost in the mirror hall
Shadows twist around me
As they shatter at my feet
Cutting into me
Deep
And I still... Want... Chocolate <********
Nevermind
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Posted: Thu Jan 21, 2010 7:29 pm
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Posted: Wed Feb 10, 2010 5:54 pm
i relly like how i can fell ur pain and gr8 use of imagrey
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Posted: Wed Feb 10, 2010 6:19 pm
Poem itself - didn't like it. Too overdone. Cut your wrists to feel alive. Go to emo guild pl0x.
BUT.
The whole "now i want chocolate".
If that was actually a part of the poem, (said differently) it would be VERY interesting.
But that's just my opinion. Don't take it for too much, I'm only one person.
Keep at it. ^-^
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Posted: Wed Feb 10, 2010 6:48 pm
Jonathonn Poem itself - didn't like it. Too overdone. Cut your wrists to feel alive. Go to emo guild pl0x. BUT. The whole "now i want chocolate". If that was actually a part of the poem, (said differently) it would be VERY interesting. But that's just my opinion. Don't take it for too much, I'm only one person. Keep at it. ^-^ 
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Posted: Thu Feb 11, 2010 12:37 am
IY_and_MCR i relly like how i can fell ur pain and gr8 use of imagrey lol i know rite? uber gothik. @Jonathonn: Really?
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Posted: Sun Mar 28, 2010 5:59 pm
This poem is terrible!
Thank goodness he was banned if he was passing this stuff off as art in my beloved Gothic Guild!
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Posted: Sun Mar 28, 2010 6:06 pm
Streetlights, there's no need to be an a**.
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Posted: Sun Mar 28, 2010 11:21 pm
DancesWithBats Streetlights, there's no need to be an a**. No he's clearly mocking what it means to be Goth! Well good riddance I say, I'm sure this guild is better off without him.
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Posted: Tue Mar 30, 2010 2:39 pm
Henneth Annun IY_and_MCR i relly like how i can fell ur pain and gr8 use of imagrey lol i know rite? uber gothik. @Jonathonn: Really?I agree really loved it biggrin m(_ _)m *not worthy* XD
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Posted: Wed Mar 31, 2010 12:01 am
Not Streetlight Fights DancesWithBats Streetlights, there's no need to be an a**. No he's clearly mocking what it means to be Goth! Well good riddance I say, I'm sure this guild is better off without him. He's not mocking what it means to be goth, he's just mocking bad stereotypical poetry.
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Posted: Wed Mar 31, 2010 7:00 pm
Henneth Annun Not Streetlight Fights DancesWithBats Streetlights, there's no need to be an a**. No he's clearly mocking what it means to be Goth! Well good riddance I say, I'm sure this guild is better off without him. He's not mocking what it means to be goth, he's just mocking bad stereotypical poetry. Hm, well maybe I guess, but it's still offensive. lolimhim
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Posted: Thu Apr 01, 2010 9:21 am
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Posted: Fri Apr 23, 2010 11:54 am
OGAWD ITS LIKE HE KNOS WHAT IM GOING ******** CHOKLIT MAN.
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-Resurrected Writer- Crew
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