Do you think I need to improve?

[Yvienna]

Here is a picture I drew recently.


(Picture is really huge so I linked to the arena)

http://www.gaiaonline.com/arena/art/painting-and-drawing/vote/?entry_id=101779007

Okay, first of all, the woman's melons are supposed to be HUGE but I kept them a natural size. XD And this is my first time drawing a guy and my first time adding detail to clothing.

 

[PoisonousMoonlight]

Of course you need to improve artists always need to and do improve their work! And It is awesome for a first time in cloth fold. I personally need help with profiles.  

[Yvienna]

Thank you. ^^  

[Yvienna]

Kapateen

Here is a picture I drew recently.


(Picture is really huge so I linked to the arena)

http://www.gaiaonline.com/arena/art/painting-and-drawing/vote/?entry_id=101779007

Okay, first of all, the woman's melons are supposed to be HUGE but I kept them a natural size. XD And this is my first time drawing a guy and my first time adding detail to clothing.

Critiques welcomed.