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 Posted: Sat Oct 03, 2009 1:50 pm
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Posted: Wed Oct 07, 2009 1:49 pm
So far, well written, great vocabulary, I may need my dictionary companion to accompany me as I read through.
I was a little thrown off by the present tense and the italics proved to be difficult for me to read in the prologue. I'll chip away at what you've been doing so far, I haven't progressed too far, just the prologue and the first chapter.
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Jafthasleftthebuilding Vice Captain
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