Sweet Dreams

[Yvaine]

Okay, I figure I'll post links here. I'm writing a fantasy/horror/romance story and have several chapters up on deviantART. If you would, please give it a read and leave some feedback - I'd like to know where there's room for improvement!

No it is not about vampires.

Part 1: Dreams - A Prologue
Part 2: The Sleeping Swordsman
Part 3: La Candelaria
Part 4: Justice For the Lost
Part 5: A Taste of Trouble
Part 6: The Starlit Path
Part 7: Plots Within Plots  

[Jafthasleftthebuilding]

So far, well written, great vocabulary, I may need my dictionary companion to accompany me as I read through.

I was a little thrown off by the present tense and the italics proved to be difficult for me to read in the prologue. I'll chip away at what you've been doing so far, I haven't progressed too far, just the prologue and the first chapter.

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