Creative writing ftw!

[CR Kyrie]

My 'gallery', so to speak.

I just wanted to let you all know that I'm a writer D= and if you could critique (or at least read) my pieces in the arena, I'd greatly appreciate it. I posted them in hopes that people would join my guild, to be honest, but then again nobody reviewed them in the guild either, haha.

I'd greatly appreciate some comments if you guys are up to it =] feedback/constructive criticism, even absolute flames. I just want something, you know? sweatdrop  

[Jafthasleftthebuilding]

You suck! scream

J.K................................ Rowling on the floor laughing.

Some wordplay for you.

I thought The End is Near was good. The ending with the self-trickery proved to be quite a clever shock.

The story with the Avian and the businessman, only interested me a little. For a mastermind, I wonder why his business is suffering. >_>  

[CR Kyrie]

Thanks razz

Actually, The End is Near is still my best, since I had a real editor and someone to bounce ideas off of.  

[Jafthasleftthebuilding]

I feel like your gallery is a little small.... >_>  

[CR Kyrie]

Well, I'm in the military xd I'm only free from about 6 to 9 pm and on weekends, so I don't have all that much time to write as much as I'd like.  

[Ninth Pariah]

Your writing is awesome. Read the autobiography story, and am thoroughly impressed. I don't write that well, and you only have three hours a day? Damn fine work, if you ask me.