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RosesOfDeathYetFullOfLife

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PostPosted: Thu Jun 18, 2009 8:12 am


Alright, well I love to write. In fact, I'm writing now. See in my sig, there's a link saying 'The series' and my banner for it. The story is,"Roses of Death yet Full of Life". This account was made just for it, the story in my journal and I need some people to judge it. Please read and comment, thanks.
PostPosted: Thu Jun 25, 2009 1:42 am


I'd love for someone to check it out, just finished another chapter

RosesOfDeathYetFullOfLife

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PostPosted: Mon Jun 29, 2009 11:16 am


Here, I'll put the introduction here ^-^

Roses of Death yet full of Life
introduction




A long time ago....
.....there was a village. This village held many races and many events but..one day however there was a story teller contest. A old woman with a cane with a hunched back walked to the stage making everyone go in a hush. "Soon...there will be a new race the big force will make. This race will be called humans,weak they will be but only at first. Humans will rise making all of go into hiding however there will be one family of them that protects us. These people will keep us hidden so we may live,it will be dark ages then I it will..." She says,really the hag was their future gazer. "What do you mean?" One shouts. "That would never happen!" Another screams. "What does this race hold for us?" yet another yells. Question after question,the woman bangs her cane against the floor and suddenly everyone there has no mouth! "My friends...my brothers...my sisters...my fathers and mothers...my family,we will be put through many things but this family will help us. However I saw a figure rising above most of the family members,the figure had a mark on the left shoulder yet their eyes were glowing like fireflies and their mouth seemed to be gone but really it was a mask that covered it. This person will be the most powerful of them all! Oh yes..yes..I see it clearly now.." The woman said as her eyes went white and she told them the myth of the Akuakaris and how each one held a deep power that helped the mystical creatures of the earth...
but that was then........

This is now........
Laughter was heard as four girls were out at the mall,where grls could shop till they dropped!! The four was walking in a line and each had their own personality agoing. Like one was dressed all black,one all bright,one all random,and the last one a little dull in a way. "COME ON! We got to try on some outfits guys,its just our thing you know?" One said and all four entered the dressing room,one popped out looking like this as the other three cheered her name~
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"Go Rose!!" "Oh my god..you look so great!!" "Girl,you are working that outfit" They commented and the girl known as Rose just laughed. Rose then posed as the girls pretended to take shots. "OH WAIT! I forgot I brought my camera.." One said and they all laughed as she took it out. "Nice camera...
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Allison!" They all cheered together then laughed. "Okay okay..now its your turn,go change!!" Rose and Allison said as they pushed their friend into the dressing room then out stepped she stepped before all black but now..
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all hip!! "You look so beautiful Angelica!!!" Allison said to her and Rose nodded. Angelica posed some poses for the camera then all three looked at their friend hiding behind the clothing. "Come on out..." "We know you're there" "Did you think you can escape us or something?" then they pulled the girl out and threw her into the dressing room. "We are not letting you out till Rose says you gotten dressed and we are not letting you get back into those boring clothing till we leave the mall at two!!!" Allison screamed out as Rose stayed inside. The girl beated the door screaming,"THATS FOUR HOURS FROM NOW I CAN'T WEAR THAT!!" as Allison and Angelica was on the other side not letting the door budge even though it was pretty hard.....after a hour from then the girl stepped out blushing like mad. "See? A skirt and a shirt showing your arms is not all bad!" One said and the other laughed and they went to a table outside. Rose told another story about how her boyfriend was all over her the other day,and Angelica told her latest poem to them. But Allison screamed her lungs out right in the middle of it,"OH MY GOD!!!". "What?" Rose said mad. "OH MY GOD?!?!?!" She screamed louder. "What is it Allison?" Angelica said annoyed. "OH MY ******** GOD!?!?!?!" Allison screamed to where it echoed..
"WHAT IS IT?!?!!?!!?!!?!?!!" All three yelled at the girl then Allison pushed a button on the camera as the light went red. "I forgot to record all our memories!!" She said with a bright smile as she turned the camera over to Kari taking a picture.
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"Kari you are so cute!!!" Allison cooed and all three sighed very deeply. Kari just smiled as Allison recorded their lunch which annoyed them greatly for the rest of lunch.....

Alright, enjoy. Please click link to see more chapters n_n
PostPosted: Sat Jul 04, 2009 10:18 am


Might as well put chap 1

Roses of Death yet full of Life
Chapter 1


Last we left off the young group was off at the mall...
....After the girls finished their lunch and made Allison stop recording them,they went over to a table outside near a table of guys. Most of them laughed and sat as Kari looked to her friends with wonder. Angelica..always the girl who was so independent but was so dark and always had a good fashion statement going with her She thought as she looked to her young friend who was joking around with the others with a group of boys while Kari just sat down just watching really. "Oh please,your so lying I saw you with like three others girls today ya player!" Angelica said looking at him while folding her arms as the guy laughed scratching the back of his head embarrassed. Kari only smiled a bit as she looked at her other friend,Rose. Rose...every one of the guys in my classes keep asking me about her,shes so nice and yet can be a real flirt. She thought looking as Rose was all over the other guy. "I like this one,hes such a cutie." Rose said to her friends then looked over to the boy and winked one of her eyes and the guy just blushed and smiled. Kari almost had a laughing fit,she then looked to Allison who was really just watching the other two like her. Allison...so random and hyper all the time,she can be a pain but its fun being with her she thought looking at her as she went through her photos. Why was she thinking this? Why was the girls even friends? So many answers yet each with a story..Kari sighed deeply and Allison looked over. "Whats wrong?" She asked as she shut her camera off as it was almost out of battery. "I just thinking...you remember how I'm moving right?" She said with a frown as her friend just nodded. "Yeah..it sucks too..we will miss you so bad..." She said hugging her tightly and Kari just hugged back. "HEY LADIES!!" One guy shouted to them,they parted and looked over,"How about you keep going and we'll just record y'all making out?" He said and took out his camera recording it. Kari tighten her grip on her hand and grabbed her half full drink and threw it at him,"SHUT THE HELL UP!!". He moved to where it missed and he laughed along with the others but not for long...the drink had kept going and a group of jocks was near by..."WHAT THE?" One of the yelled as they saw soda all around his back and pants. "THAT WAS MY FAVORITE PANTS YOU BITCHES!!" He yelled out as he turned around looking at all of them as so did the other jocks. Allison looked over at them then tried to defend them,"Hey no need to be so mad,I mean blame him he moved and made it hit you!" She said pointing. The guy,of course, just pointed back. "Oh yeah? Please,your friend over there threw it!!" Then they started saying remark after remark..."SHUT UP!!" The leader shouted and popped his knuckles as another jock spoke out. "I'm getting each one of ya and I'm making sure who ever threw it will get the worse beating of their life!" He threaten and before he ran up Angelica blocked him. "You better back off my friends or I'm gonna beat your a** to where you can't sit!" She threaten back and the leader jock banged his fist into the table and it cracked..then fell as he had broken the strong wooden table with one punch..

"Ok...I got nothing...RUN FOR YOUR LIFES!!!" Allsion said as she got in front of Angelica making her back up a bit then took off which it didn't take long for the rest to run behind her. "GET BACK HERE!!!" The leader yelled and pushed the tables away as he and the jocks ran after the large group. Kari was a little behind but kept up not looking back,Angelica was in the semi back as well but kept throwing stuff down to block the jock's path to them,Allison of course was in the front running like hell and lead the pack of theirs,Rose ran and was behind three guys that was behind Allison,and finally the last two guys was in the very back. The large group took a turn while Angelica threw down three trash cans,"Keep moving!!" She yelled as she saw the jocks close in on them. The jocks ran but picked up the trashcans and threw them way ahead and blocked the groups way. "WRONG WAY!!" Allison yelled and took another turn the group not too far behind. The mall cops of course was also behind the jocks,and a few mad costumers behind them as the large chase kept going! As the group ran one of the guys in the back tripped making him scream in regret as he was suddenly dragged away by two jocks and the group looked back with pity as one other guy shouted,"Sorry dude!" And the group ran on,having more determination to get to the end as the poor guy...(details can't be read by young eyes) was left behind and probably won't be able to walk for quite some time-but the jocks was not happy after that,they wanted Kari since she threw it.


Kari looked and saw all the jocks looking at her lie wild beast to prey,"COME ON GUYS LETS GET HER!!" The leader had yelled and the jocks got way ahead of the mall cops making the innocent group just run more now afraid out of their mind! All panting,all running,and all was determined either to get away or try to get the other! Why were they so mad? Cause people,jocks can be mad at the littlest things when they are already pissed about something else...and they scary when mad o-o....Angelica threw a stand here or there to buy them more time,the guy next to her looked behind them,"They coming closer...you guys go ahead.." He said then Angelica shook he head. "No you staying here and your going to get out in one peace just like the rest of us!!" She said running but he slowed down. "Go! I'll get them!" He said turning around and got down three stands as the jocks threw the other stands out of the way. Angelica sighed and ran ahead feeling guilty but knew it was not her desiocon. Rose ran and ran but was slowing down then one guy pushed her back and smiled a bit then she finally sprinted a bit and was back in front as they dear near the ex-"THE EXIT!!" Most of them shouted..before i finished the sentence. (writes in something) There,that teach not to interrupt your author! Ahem,the cops were already at the exit and soon the group was surrounded by all the people wanting to hurt them! "We are so sorry for what we did..." Kari said to really no one,but hey I got a heart...(writes in something else)..Suddenly the boys pull out water balloons and throws them everywhere! One shouted to the girls,"Go ahead! We'll take it from here...but you guys owe us a date.." He said winking at Rose. Rose just kissed him right there and then! Then all the girls ran out then started to run towards the parking lot, some mall cops not too far behind! "MOM!!!" She screamed and a car rushed near them, they quickly got in and shut the door behind them as the driver drove out of there leaving the scene but lecturing as she went,"YOUNG LADY YOU ARE NOT TO-" However her daughter already drowned her voice with her music, which the mother didn't know. The girls high fived each other then Allison turned to Kari. "Nice last day huh?" She joked then all of them busted out laughing as Kari just nodded,laughing along............

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