Poem(please read let me know what you think)

[ii-Alexia_Cubana_BMG-ii]

Who Am I??

Just look into my eyes and see what you can see.
Just listen to my laugh and hear what you can hear.
Now take my heart and feel what you can feel.
I'm so different than what you could ever think.
I'm a girl that's true, I've been through so much and I'm sure you have to.
My personality is unique my voice is as soft as new born baby.
My heart is open just waiting for someone to take it but never break,
though it's too late for that.
I appear to be happy, and i am. But if you look into my eyes you'll see who I really am.
Just a simple girl wanting to make a impact on this cold world, fall in love, laugh until the day i die, wipe every tear from any eye who has ever cried, Just be who I was meant to be.

 

[CookiieCriisp]

Day
Day

Day is Light
Day is Now
Day is Birth
Day is Wow
The big blue sky
Or the bright blue sea
So many things, that day could be
The color of ice
The bringing of snow
When day comes fourth
Yes, people will know
Day shines strong
Day comes fast
Lets take care of this earth,
So that day will Last


I write poems myself too smile Lolz

I really like yours, I felt the sincerity of it razz  

[---DJacobson---]

wrote this one yesterday when I was happy of course

when I'm happy I radiate it, when I'm sad I radiate it, I am fountain, emotion, energy, love, affection, and everything I want to put in between, my life is not easy to describe, but when I am at ease the world seems to not matter and I just feel like I'm flying, like in a water, but free to stay under as long as I want, free from the slavery of thinking about everything and just being one with living, I love this feeling, don't take it away from me, I embrace as a gift from the highest of all things I could want, is that what I seek in life? an ease of will, the feeling of freedom, eternal happiness, I believe so and I don't know why anybody else wouldn't want this, I have so much happiness I can't sleep, is this what true happiness feels like? I love it, better than anything in the world I could ask for, thank you anyone...

though yours surprised me, strong and meaningful, beautiful in some ways too
and I would say I'm emotional, I just use gaia as my one place to release, my journal contains some interesting crap and for that matter if you read it yes I still don't know if I want to live, but I am NOT emo!  

[CookiieCriisp]

Yah.

Hers = 10+  

[ii-Alexia_Cubana_BMG-ii]

Ah, i love yours Cookie!! smile

Sometimes...

Sometimes I think you know how I feel.
Sometimes I can't even believe this real.
Sometimes I just want to whisper in you ear
and let you know what you need to hear.
You're so lucky but only because sometimes
I can be so shy.
Sometimes I just wish you could read minds
or eyes
That way I would never have to speak one word.
Sometimes...

 

[ii-Alexia_Cubana_BMG-ii]

Jacob yours is awesome!!
I like this part:
" I have so much happiness I can't sleep, is this what true happiness feels like? "
because that's how i feel sometimes hehe!!

 

[CookiieCriisp]

Oh Emm Gee!


That Sometimes poem I REALLY like it.


You And I

You and I
We're ment to be
You and i will always be
We'll take our time
And Make it last
We'll Take it slow
Won't go to fast
Our truths and truths will time unfold
When we grow old, this story told
To the young both far and wide
The story of both You and I
I love the way that your hair blows
I love the smell within your clothes
I love to stare you in your eyes
I love to hold you when you cry
I love to kiss upon your cheek
We'll climb our problems to highest peak
You love to say i told you so
Your there to say please baby no
You love to say im here, dont cry
Your love is warm like fresh baked pie
Someday we'll both look back and laugh
At how wonderful our love is present and past.  

[---DJacobson---]

iiS3Xii_Bianca

Jacob yours is awesome!!
I like this part:
" I have so much happiness I can't sleep, is this what true happiness feels like? "
because that's how i feel sometimes hehe!!

the whole poem is true, that part especially, I was up till 2:30 AM my parents forced me to go to sleep  

[ii-Alexia_Cubana_BMG-ii]

Oh shoot cookie!! That poem You and I was the shiznits!! haha
like no joke!!

"I love the way that your hair blows
I love the smell within your clothes
I love to stare you in your eyes
I love to hold you when you cry
I love to kiss upon your cheek "
My favorite part and then also everything that follows this part!!
Those words are words that any girl would love to hear aw so sweet so much meaning in this poem it made my heart beat fast haha!!

 

[ii-Alexia_Cubana_BMG-ii]

---DJacobson---

iiS3Xii_Bianca

Jacob yours is awesome!!
I like this part:
" I have so much happiness I can't sleep, is this what true happiness feels like? "
because that's how i feel sometimes hehe!!

the whole poem is true, that part especially, I was up till 2:30 AM my parents forced me to go to sleep

Wow really?? that's insane!! You must of been ecstatic that's like happy times 1 billion haha!!

 

[CookiieCriisp]

Lol, Awww thanks making me blush XD  

[ii-Alexia_Cubana_BMG-ii]

hehe you're welcome!!
smile
Yea i was tryin to make ya
blush!!
na just kidding but it's cute
that you did haha!!

 

[CookiieCriisp]

Haha.  

[---DJacobson---]

iiS3Xii_Bianca

---DJacobson---

iiS3Xii_Bianca

Jacob yours is awesome!!
I like this part:
" I have so much happiness I can't sleep, is this what true happiness feels like? "
because that's how i feel sometimes hehe!!

the whole poem is true, that part especially, I was up till 2:30 AM my parents forced me to go to sleep

Wow really?? that's insane!! You must of been ecstatic that's like happy times 1 billion haha!!

ooooh yeah, happiest I ever been in my life, note the thread made by me, and my three newest journal posts  

[cassiedracorien]

most of my poems are too dark and sinister and grafic to show on a teen site LOL im liking thse though they are awsome keep up the good work everyone,to us all we were given the gift and sin of knowledge and imagination, so you should choose to use it, because even if you dont it sinning all the same (as such)