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PostPosted: Sat Apr 25, 2009 6:51 pm


this is a story about a girl named Amber and after a car crash she forgot who she was who her family was and who her friends were. she remembered only the past likewhen she was born the things she learned and she pretty much doesnt remember her personal past.

Amber

Friends
Rachana(Rachie)
Lily(lil)
Kate
Linette(lin)
Cailyn(caily)
Alex
Matt
Jordan
Aron

Family
Linette(older sis)
Lily(younger sis)

Li(died in past)
James(died in past)
PostPosted: Sat Apr 25, 2009 7:28 pm


Forgotten


"Hey amber Where do you wanna eat? all of us are having a tieon where to eat but you havent voted.." Rachana asked. i looked at my friends in the car. there were four others. Rachana, Kate, Alex, and Matt. rachana and alex chose a bbq steak house and kate and matt chose a place full of spoups, smoothies, and sanwiches... "uhh i go with alex and kate sorry... hey mbey we can go to the steak place order out for u 2 then go to the sandwich place rder out then go to the park and relax like a picnic!" i figured they would say yes since they the best of friends even matt i liked him but there was someone i likes when i was in 1st or 2nd grade. his name was also matt but he was like my older brother he cared and helped me no matter what.. "AMBER!!!" They all said staring at me like i was ignoring them..."Yea?" i asked "what do u want ?" matt asked "oh im not hungry anymore ill just share a sandwich w/ someone." i said forcing a smile even tho i wanted to fun home and cry myself to sleep.on out way to the park.."alex turn around hands on the wheel!!!!!" we screamed... "ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh..." we all screamed. the car crashed into 3 other cars ahead and behind of us two in the front one i the bak. alex andrachana we in a mildly ingured condition matt is ok but mee..... "amber you awake?" matt asked..."who is amber and who are you?" i was angr from what happened how can this stranger come and sit next to me w/ out knowing him? " But who am i? whats may name? where do i live? and what am i doing here?" i said "ok your name is amber kim. you live 823 snset circle. your here b/c you and your friends got into a car crash. oh my name is matt." he explained everything

"whee are my parents also do i have any sibblings?" i asked once again. "you have 2 sisters and i hate to say it your parents died when you were a baby your sister and about 3 part time jobs to rise you and your younger sister Lily. oh yea your older sister is named Linette." he answered once again. "oh 2 r your friends are in a mild ingury but still sleeping. umm also im araid to say one of them never woke up and she ended up having no....... .pulse." he sadly said...." i was afraid i might lose you... i have something to say a long time ago in 1st grade you met a boy named matt too im him.. i never told you b/c i was afraid you would not believe me..." he started to cry a little bit "i remember you from the past... the times we ad together you would always make me luaghand i would always comfort you when you were down and you comforted mewhen i was down.." i started to cry so much i had to go home... "can you take me home?" i asked umm sure but we might have to walk b/c the car is gone in flames." he sadly said. " oh its ok i love to walk its sort of my thing!" i smiled matt thought for a monment. she is really different she used to love driving now she loves walking and now she is amazingly nice kind friendly cute down to earth and shy sweet...

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PostPosted: Sun Apr 26, 2009 3:04 pm


o our way to my house knocked onto the door... "is that you amber where were you i was worried sick im going to college and its gonna be a hard time for you two b/c you guys are going to an orphange!" she was angry alright "uhmm.. amber dont worry ok..." matt said "uhmm linette we were in a car crash b/c of alex and now amber lost half of her memories." his voice sounded a little scared. "yea thats pretty much what happened.. uhmm can i go into the house and sorry for asking soo many questions uhmm can you guys help i feelt very hot and dizzy" then as i took a step i fell to the ground.,
PostPosted: Sun Apr 26, 2009 3:08 pm


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