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 Posted: Wed Nov 02, 2005 6:34 pm
'kay, Well... I get into these like dreary states near the middle of the night, and my imagination goes wild, but drawing doesn't seems to settle it, so I write, occasionally, they're mostly rants about my life and how Complicated it is... but the odd one is a story about a heroine I wish I was...
And So it begins.
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Posted: Wed Nov 02, 2005 6:41 pm
Midnight Moon
As I look up at the heavens,
I see the beauty covered by the blanket of day.
The stars alight like jewels.
I see the horrible clouds of poison
the Pollution of the earth.
Although it's distruction is grotesque,
It's mysticized the moon, in all it's glory.
I always thought a life short lived,
was a one with out freedom, and serenity.
but to these moments, I feel most free from earthly bonds.
Staring into the abyss of the moon,
the fog making it's mysteries all the more hidden,
The land a dark corner,
I find myself Writing....
Without the seas of sleep to guide me,
These mysteries show me tranquility.
My Sanctuary, Only seen on Sleepless Nights.
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Posted: Wed Nov 02, 2005 6:47 pm
Random Poem, During School
My Friends are Surrounding me,
Yet, I feel so Alone.
They talk about nothing...
About trival things, enough to make me sick.
Boys, Make up, some clothes too,
How wrong they are to think I care...
I feel so detached, so different.
I know I'm losing myself,
I'm fading, dissappearing...
now more than ever.
I have no one,
I'm alone, because i'm so different.
I can't answer my pleas
no one can.
(This one is kinda Angsty, this was in gr.7, I'm in gr. 10 now, and I'm just dandy!)
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Posted: Wed Nov 02, 2005 6:56 pm
Everybodies Answers (Pup, this is one I won with... with some minor tweaking)
These tears I've shed, aren't for you, never for you. They mourn all the time wasted on You. For all the time that I spent waiting for a lie to become truth. Why are we here? None of us realise the reasons, and I just wish I had. I wish I knew before the waves of Lovesickness befell me. Why do everyones problems become discovered in a poem, a few moments pondering these reasons, as person as ones thoughts are, and it's everyones vision.
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Posted: Wed Nov 23, 2005 3:40 pm
sad Of course we love you Annee heart
Your poems are amazing. And what you what you wrote about getting into dreamy states, I do the same thing, but not just in the middle of the night.
When this happens I write as well, though most of the time I'm dreaming up different ends or begins to what I already have >.<
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Posted: Fri Nov 25, 2005 12:46 pm
Thank you very much, I'm touched.
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Posted: Sun Nov 27, 2005 8:49 am
Anneechin23 Thank you very much, I'm touched. sorry, that was me!! -runs away- I'm kiiiiiiidding!!
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Posted: Sat Dec 03, 2005 9:36 am
enter_the_darkness Anneechin23 Thank you very much, I'm touched. sorry, that was me!! -runs away- I'm kiiiiiiidding!! ?
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Posted: Thu Dec 15, 2005 7:18 pm
[ Message temporarily off-line ]
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Posted: Tue May 16, 2006 7:36 pm
A child laughs in the distance An Innocence Uncovered,
untampered, intact. A young women cries to sleep An obedience painful and violent. A young man dies tonight his lover weeps at her mistake. An old man shakes his head Dissapprovingly at his son and his boyfriend. Just a little Free verse..
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Posted: Tue May 16, 2006 7:41 pm
Hide it.
That untouched beauty.
Save it.
Be Different
Discover it.
That untouched beauty
cherish it.
Be Different.
Explore your own back yard.
Normal and Familar.
Create a Sanctuary.
Hide it.
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Posted: Fri May 26, 2006 9:35 am
I like your free verse! It reminds me of haikus.
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Posted: Sat May 27, 2006 11:43 am
ANNEE!!! Sorry, I've kinda been inactive in the guild latey. I LOVE YOUR POEMS!!!! heart heart heart heart heart I love your rantings also! You're such a beautiful writer!
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Posted: Tue Jun 13, 2006 8:19 am
Pup in Fluff ANNEE!!! Sorry, I've kinda been inactive in the guild latey. I LOVE YOUR POEMS!!!! heart heart heart heart heart I love your rantings also! You're such a beautiful writer! thanks pup, I haven't been on much lately either.. although I'm glad the guild's getting active again.. it was getting pretty lonely. ^.^ I'm sure I'll have some more whiney rants shortly. the time to move is upon me.
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