Anne's long-winded speeches about how her life isn't perfect

[Anneechin23]

'kay, Well... I get into these like dreary states near the middle of the night, and my imagination goes wild, but drawing doesn't seems to settle it, so I write, occasionally, they're mostly rants about my life and how Complicated it is... but the odd one is a story about a heroine I wish I was...

And So it begins.  

[Anneechin23]

Midnight Moon

As I look up at the heavens,
I see the beauty covered by the blanket of day.
The stars alight like jewels.

I see the horrible clouds of poison
the Pollution of the earth.
Although it's distruction is grotesque,
It's mysticized the moon, in all it's glory.

I always thought a life short lived,
was a one with out freedom, and serenity.
but to these moments, I feel most free from earthly bonds.

Staring into the abyss of the moon,
the fog making it's mysteries all the more hidden,
The land a dark corner,
I find myself Writing....

Without the seas of sleep to guide me,
These mysteries show me tranquility.
My Sanctuary, Only seen on Sleepless Nights.  

[Anneechin23]

Random Poem, During School

My Friends are Surrounding me,
Yet, I feel so Alone.

They talk about nothing...
About trival things, enough to make me sick.
Boys, Make up, some clothes too,
How wrong they are to think I care...
I feel so detached, so different.

I know I'm losing myself,
I'm fading, dissappearing...
now more than ever.

I have no one,
I'm alone, because i'm so different.
I can't answer my pleas
no one can.

(This one is kinda Angsty, this was in gr.7, I'm in gr. 10 now, and I'm just dandy!)  

[Anneechin23]

Everybodies Answers (Pup, this is one I won with... with some minor tweaking)

These tears I've shed, aren't for you, never for you. They mourn all the time wasted on You. For all the time that I spent waiting for a lie to become truth. Why are we here? None of us realise the reasons, and I just wish I had. I wish I knew before the waves of Lovesickness befell me. Why do everyones problems become discovered in a poem, a few moments pondering these reasons, as person as ones thoughts are, and it's everyones vision.  

[Anneechin23]

Thank you very much, I'm touched.  

[dark queen of space]

Anneechin23

Thank you very much, I'm touched.

sorry, that was me!! -runs away- I'm kiiiiiiidding!!  

[Anneechin23]

enter_the_darkness

Anneechin23

Thank you very much, I'm touched.

sorry, that was me!! -runs away- I'm kiiiiiiidding!!

?  

[Anneechin23]

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[Anneechin23]

A child laughs in the distance

An Innocence

Uncovered,
untampered,

intact.

A young women cries to sleep

An obedience

painful

and violent.

A young man dies tonight

his lover

weeps

at her mistake.

An old man shakes his head

Dissapprovingly

at his son

and his boyfriend.


Just a little Free verse..  

[Anneechin23]

Hide it.
That untouched beauty.
Save it.
Be Different

Discover it.
That untouched beauty
cherish it.
Be Different.

Explore your own back yard.
Normal and Familar.
Create a Sanctuary.
Hide it.  

[hapahaole]

I like your free verse! It reminds me of haikus.  

[Pup in Fluff]

ANNEE!!! Sorry, I've kinda been inactive in the guild latey. I LOVE YOUR POEMS!!!! heart heart heart heart heart I love your rantings also! You're such a beautiful writer!  

[Anneechin23]

Pup in Fluff

ANNEE!!! Sorry, I've kinda been inactive in the guild latey. I LOVE YOUR POEMS!!!! heart heart heart heart heart I love your rantings also! You're such a beautiful writer!

thanks pup, I haven't been on much lately either.. although I'm glad the guild's getting active again.. it was getting pretty lonely. ^.^ I'm sure I'll have some more whiney rants shortly. the time to move is upon me.