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 Posted: Sun Mar 22, 2009 11:09 am
"Don't do this!" I heard myself plead with Jokai.
"Marianna," he grabbed my arm feircly, "I must, or you wll die as your father did." The blood on his hands was wet and warm.
I felt tears begin down my cheeks. My horse stood waiting for me to mount it. Jokai's voice was hardly above a whisper, "You are no longer Princess Marianna de l'Attonia. You have never heard that name before. You are now Juliet Artsa Carnelle, daughter of Lord Carnelle of the Kolin district. Don't stop. Don't turn back." I heard shouts from behind Jokai.
He glanced behind him, "I will come to you with the name Romeo Castanetta." He pulled my head down and quickly kissed me saying, "Go to the Kolin District, I will find you, I promise" With that, he slapped my horse. As my horse ran through the gates, I heard his sword being unsheathed.
"To the Kolin district," I whispered. "Be safe, my Romeo."
~~~~Please let me know what you think about that...
Ive been thinking of writing a book with that kind of take on Romeo and Juliet.~~~~
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Posted: Sun Mar 22, 2009 11:32 am
sounds interesting. makes me want to know why they have to change there names and hide.
also made me imagine a line that would go
I heard his sword being unsheathed. This followed by the sound of him screaming out in pain. I fear my beloved lives no more.....
I don't know why I think things like that I just do but it would be interesting to do a part were you don't know if some one is dead or alive. that may be an idea for an other story however.
also check out our reader's corner when you have finished your story. its the subfourm located under this one on our subforum list on the main page.
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Posted: Tue May 05, 2009 9:44 pm
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3- You should hug them in public! Paste it on their user page!
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