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 Posted: Sun Oct 16, 2005 8:24 pm
Yay! More poems have been added. I'll eventually move more of them into the same post so I can use one of my posts for stories. I'm so glad I've finally gotten time to update this! I'm currently taking a Creative Writing class and I like some of the stuff we do in there. I'll do my best to keep it updated! Please comment or question anything! 3nodding
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Posted: Sun Oct 16, 2005 8:28 pm
Feelings Undefined
Wonders; there are many
Emotions; states of mind
But do we notice any?
They?re feelings undefined
You question my emotions
But you know that I'm right
Everytime you make a motion
My poem, you'll recite
Happiness is like a bird
That sometimes flies away
Silence is a glorious word
That no one shall hear or say
Life is like the weather
It has its highs and lows
Our days are like a feather
So fragily they flow
Love is like a puff of smoke
That?s always out of reach
Tears are like a tragic joke
Emotion without speech
Words are like a broken heart
How easily they harm
A child is a brand new start
For people that they charm
Insanity?s a crazy voice
That?s always in your head
Lust is like an awful choice
That people always dread
Envy?s like a creature
A selfish, evil beast
Your conscience is you teacher
On your greed, it does feast
Sorrow?s like a mournful song
That?s always sung off key
A broken heart would not feel wrong
If we could all agree
Pain is like a holiday
It comes. It goes. It's done.
Greif is like a sad bouquet
The pain has just begun
Wonders; there are many
Emotions, states of mind
Now we can notice many
We are no longer blind
Now question all the wonders
Every feeling deep within
Don't make to many blunders
Just trust the voice within
For the feelings undefined
Will not stay that way long
They'll all go crazy in your mind
'Til you know where they belong...
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Death Poem
I look over my body
The heart monitor draws a blank line
"Clear!" ZAP
I can't feel it.
"Clear!" Again
Nothing.
I turn away to the skies
Look down at the world around me
How will they take the news?
Will they even care?
Everything is red...
Red as the blood that poured from my skull
Red as the tears I cried
As I layed there and died
Though I feel like I'm floating,
My feet are heavy
As if my body were still hanging on.
Maybe I'm not completely gone yet
Maybe there's a chance I can still be alive...
Floating higher...closer...
Will the clouds open up?
Or will I just shatter the glass sky?
The weight on my foot tightens.
"Clear!" I hear again
Zap! Breath...
The heart monitor beeps
As the doctors remove the hole from my head
And the bullet from my thoughts
After pronouncing me dead.
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Picture-Please Note: The first stanza of this poem was taken from an icon. The rest of it is mine.
I want to draw a picture
I'll draw it with a twist
I want to draw a razor blade
And I'll draw it on my wrist
I'll draw a lonely setting
A lover that was lost
And by the time the sun goes down
I'll pay the final cost
I'll draw a darkened sunset
Among a bloody sky
With clouds of terror reigning down
And evil gusts awry
I'll draw a hallow heartache
That's filled with empty lies
And broken, shallow fantasies
A true lovers demise
And when I draw these pictures
I'll push my pain aside
And carve these scenes into my wrist
To show a love denied
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Posted: Sun Oct 16, 2005 8:30 pm
No Face
I walk through the crowd
They don't notice
I walk around town
They don't know
They can't see me
They can't tell I'm near
They just don't care
They don't understand
Who are they?
Who am I?
Why don't I know?
Why...
They see a shadow
Created to please them
They don't know it
They can't tell
They can't see me
For who I really am
They aren't able
They just won't...
No Face walks through the crowd
No Face walks around town
I want the sun on my face
I just want them to see
I want them to know
But how do I show them?
How can they look
At me for me?
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Double Kiss- Trouble Kiss
I dOn't quite understand
What's going through my head
Too much is going on
How do I control it?
When you kissed me...
There was no one else I'd rather be with.
But when he kisses me...
The whole world goes away.
I don't know how to say,
That I kissed two.
A double kiss
To lead to truth
Left me deeper
Much deeper...
In the lies...
In the confusion...
In you.
What should I do?
This double kiss-
A trouble kiss
Still brought me back to you
But he's still there
Waiting for what
I'm going to do.
Tell me what to do
Before, again
I kiss two.
Because I love him
And I still love you.
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Velvet Stitches
Empty dreams
Empty lies
Empty emotions...
Empty love.
Heartache
Heartbreak
Sew the velvet stitches.
Moonlight,
Headlight,
All seen by the end.
Hollow days
Hollow promises
Hollow Heaven...
Hollow life.
Living
Dying
Breathing
Suffocating.
Red air
Red eyes
Red death
Simple meanings
Foggy intentions
Tell me the truth.
Black cloud
Silver lining...
Silver bullet.
Gun in hand.
Open thoughts
Open mind
Opened heart
Spilling blood.
Sew the velvet stitches
Sew my heart and mend our love
Fill the hole
Remove the pain
I lie here dying without you...
Headlights...
Tail lights...
Moon light.
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Posted: Sun Oct 16, 2005 8:31 pm
Nothing Left
There's nothing left of my happiness
My joy or sorrow or pain
I sometimes wish it would come back
So I can live again
I look back at the happy times
And sorrow's what I feel
My happiness has gone away
My emotions have a seal
My heart is bottled up inside
All the love has gone away
Everything seems dark and harsh
And I wonder if I should stay
There's nothing left of anger or tears
They went by like a cloud
Nothing's left of anything now
It makes the world seem loud
Nothing's left of fearful days
The terror's gone from my soul
My memories will perish
My spirit has a hole
But, one day, it will close up
My emotions will come back
I will soon have happy days
And my life won't be as black
But until that day has come
I need to hold my breath
Because my emotions are now gone
And there is nothing left
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Is It True?
It's so strange...
How a couple of months can change,
Anything and everything that we knew.
One month-
I'm madly in love with you.
Next month-
I can't even look at you.
Maybe it's just me.
But the fact that I'm still thinking...
Maybe that means something?
The fact that I'm still wondering-
Tells me I still love you.
It's true that I love two
But who do I really want?
One to love or one to learn?
Seven months versus two.
Lies versus truths.
Days...
Nights...
Time has worn us down.
Life has left us dry...
And I cry.
And I wonder why...
I wonder why.
But I remain to wonder
Until the day runs true
The fact that I still wonder
Lets me know
I still love you.
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Posted: Sun Oct 16, 2005 8:32 pm
Unspoken Words
Something that I need to say
That can not be said
Something that you need to know
As thoughts come to my head
My days have been disasters
My life's a living Hell
I want to say these things to you
But I will never tell
I'm not all yellow sunshines
Things never go my way
Unless my life gets better soon
I don't think you should stay
A drop of blood, a rusted knife
It's all the same to me
It's all another, normal day
I hope you're soon to see
I want to end my torture now
But I remain unheard
All these things you need to know
Remain unspoken words
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No Other Way
The moon shines true light on us
We both see it
But neither of us shows it.
We both know it and feel it
But neither completely understands it.
What is left of us?
Nothing but pain...
Pain caused by heartless truths from the soul
How will this end?
We know what we want but how will we get there?
It's a maze...
A maze of broken roads-
Broken dreams-
And broken hearts.
Why does your soul leech so?
Leech of such horrors as my bleak dispair
Why must our hearts wretch so much pain?
What can cause so much misery?
Only you, my love...
And I'd have it no other way.
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These are profoundly lovely.
Unspoken Words.. is deep in possessing pain and love for another.
No Other Way...causes me to ponder of life and choices that we make.
Both are dark in essence and well done.
I enjoy your style of poetic verse with it`s fresh edges.
Thank you, for sharing.
................WildWildWindWhisperer wink
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Posted: Sun Oct 16, 2005 8:35 pm
Emotionless
This one still needs tweaking
I sit in my room
Alone
I look around
No One...
I walk out of the door
Nothing
I walk around the house
Empty
I sit down and listen
Silence
I stand up and walk outside
Darkness
I look up at the cloudy sky
Starless
I back go to my room and live my life
Emotionless
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Meet At Sea
All angels are destined to fall
Though tonight...
The only thing that will fall
Are my toxic tears...
Tears that suffocate all
Even those most unwilling to die.
As I sit here and cry
Not knowing why
My love is not enough
It's still tough
That through all this...
Stuff...
You and I won't ever be
Though the tears we cry-
Will meet at sea.
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Walk Across-this was a poem that I wrote for my Creative Writing class. The repeating words and phrases were supposed to be in there.
There is a huge canyon cutting across the land
A bridge connects the sides
A weathered bridge with cold planks
Connected to ropes
Tattered, torn, ropes
One step could be your downfall
But still, I walk across
To a masterpiece of rock
Nature's own abstract design
Abstract as the thoughts in my head
Sculpted in smooth sandstone
As I walk across
I come upon a cave
Deep and dark
As a cloud covered sky
On some foreign planet at night
I walk across
Little bat-like creatures all around
Mutant bats seem out of place
Against this piece of beauty
And I walk across
As if fearing my life
With these monsters behind me
Walking across
To a cabin
A cabin hidden
Hidden by a threshold of redwoods and pines
As I walk across the forest
To follow the crowd of people
Marching on like zombies
To follow them into a building
This monument placed by the hands of God
As I walk across
A spark...a tiny spark of light
All who entered will never come out
The pure glory of this cabin
Is set ablaze
As I walk across
The flame of disaster
Burning down my only getaway
I turn around and run across
The bridge crumbles
As I try to run across
Falling into an abyss of nothingness
Falling back into reality
As I run across.
Note: This was a dream I had for those who don't understand.
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Posted: Sun Oct 16, 2005 9:47 pm
Very very deep... I was pretty depressed for a long time until one of my friends brought me back and made me feel like I exist again.
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Posted: Mon Oct 17, 2005 1:02 pm
Unspoken words was an amazing poem defently my favourite.Kepp up the amazing writting! 3nodding
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Posted: Mon Oct 17, 2005 1:31 pm
Feelings Undefined...wow. Just wow, that was how I felt towards a certain someone in my High School.
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Posted: Mon Oct 17, 2005 7:28 pm
Those were great. Very nice. heart
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Posted: Mon Oct 17, 2005 8:25 pm
-sighs- Pup, Your awesome... It's powerful to read someones emotions... especially if they are propelled from the page.. or in this case the screen. Huggles!
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Posted: Mon Oct 17, 2005 8:32 pm
Anneechin23 -sighs- Pup, Your awesome... It's powerful to read someones emotions... especially if they are propelled from the page.. or in this case the screen. Huggles!
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Posted: Tue Oct 18, 2005 4:35 pm
i liked them all and think you should keep it up... i like how you expressed the feelings into your poems, they really stood out. nice job. domokun
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Posted: Tue Oct 18, 2005 5:01 pm
My goodness! They're amazing. Have you ever considered entering them in poety contests? (I mean in real life, not Gaia)
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Posted: Wed Oct 19, 2005 1:51 pm
Pup in Fluff Anneechin23 -sighs- Pup, Your awesome... It's powerful to read someones emotions... especially if they are propelled from the page.. or in this case the screen. Huggles! wow... that seems to happen alot to me... v.v Anyways good job Pup!
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