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[A][Tsubasa] Kuro/Fai

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Is it okay or drastic?
It's fine.
50%
 50%  [ 6 ]
Could be far better.
25%
 25%  [ 3 ]
Never go near my fandom ever again.
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I've never even read Tsubasa, sorry!
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Total Votes : 12


Lady Gyrfalcon
Crew

Dapper Ghost

PostPosted: Wed Nov 07, 2007 1:54 pm


When a pairing won't stop nagging at a fangirl with third-rate drawing skills...

These are the result. neutral

I guess it's okay... For a first attempt.
Did I mention I'm obsessed with the clothes they wear in LeCourt?
Mm... Colour scheme.

And Horitsuba Gakuen has been nagging at me... I sense a strange comic of no more than 7 panels.

But I have to keep working to get better! Constructive criticism...?
PostPosted: Sat Nov 10, 2007 6:23 am


I thought the second one was cute. ^_^

SilverMaple
Crew

Sparkly Lover


Lady Gyrfalcon
Crew

Dapper Ghost

PostPosted: Sat Nov 10, 2007 2:55 pm


Thank you.

But I really do need to get better. sweatdrop The first two are so bad I can't even begin to describe how much I wish I was better.

I like even trying to make my own poses, though.
PostPosted: Wed Feb 06, 2008 9:28 pm


Your art work is like the MONA LISA compared to mine.
In other words I think its really nice.

Prtyinpink


number the second

PostPosted: Wed Feb 13, 2008 6:24 pm


love the expressions, but the anatomy needs a little work. Also for the last on I don't think the smoke and suit theme works well with the bright rays of light from the lamp post. Should maybe colour over the rays, make them black or something?
PostPosted: Thu Mar 13, 2008 4:20 pm


Those are really cute. You have an interesting art style that I really enjoy. One thing you could work on is the shapes of their heads. Honestly I think this is even harder than drawing hands, because the head is where most of the observer's attention is directed. I've been drawing for years and years and I still have trouble with shaping faces and such.

Katastrophic_Kate

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