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Posted: Fri Aug 10, 2007 7:51 pm
http://www.fictionpress.com/~daveysmith
It's the only story on the bottom there. Or, if you'd rather jump right into the story and bypass my Fiction Press profile, click the link in my siggy. It started as a submission for a Writers Fest I got signed up for, and worked its way to what it is now. I'd like some reviews. It's quite long, as it hits somewhere towards 15,000 words in nine chapters and a prelude. ^^;
Please be honest with your reviews, just don't be hurtful about it. *pokes sig below link*
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Posted: Mon Aug 13, 2007 6:47 pm
Is my story that long? gonk I guess I won't get any reviews any time soon. sweatdrop
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