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Posted: Tue Jul 24, 2007 3:23 pm
J.K.Rowling is the original creator, but I will be using her characters for this FanFic
This is in an alternate timeline of their sixth year at Hogwarts. In this alternate timeline... 1. Sirius Black was not killed and is also free. 2. Voldemort was destroyed by Harry durring the battle at the Ministry. 3. The Death Eaters were all imprisoned, except the ones who were proven to be cursed or threatened by Voldemort. 4. Bellatrix Lestrange and Narcissa Malfoy, as well as their family, befriended Harry and his friends for saving them and their family from Voldemort.
(P.S. this is the master edition of my story, all chapters will be posted here as well as on their own.) --------------------------------First day back--------------------------------------
Harry had just gotten off of the Hogwarts express, feeling tired and hungry from the long journey. His two closest friends, Ron Weasley and Hermione Granger, were sitting in a carriage waiting for the shorter trip to the grounds of Hogwarts School of Witchcraft and Wizardry.
"Harry" said Ron. "What are you staring at mate?" "Huh?" responded the black haired boy with the lightning shaped scar on his forehead. "What did ya say Ron?" "I said, What are you staring at!?" he replied in an annoyed voice. "Ronald there's no need to get snippy!" said Hermione. "He's bein' a down right git Hermione! Not even payin' attention to his own best mate!" Ron replied hastily. "Bloody hell! Will you two stop fighting already!? You were arguing through the whole ride here!" Harry yelled in annoyance.
Ever since their little makeout sessoin in Ron's room in the Burrow, they had been at each other's throtes. Harry had walked in on Ron pressing Hermione against the wall, snogging voilently! Hermoine didn't seem to mind though. She had actually looked rather happy at Ron's sudden agressiveness.
"If you two would just talk about your little snogging session instead of fighting you might just be a little happier and more pleasant to be around!" Harry snaped at them. The truth is he was hiding the fact of what, actually who, he had been staring at. "Harry!" Hermoine yelled in a somewhat scared voice. The truth was that she had turned crimson as Harry mentioned that afternoon. "Blimey Harry! What the hell was that for! Yellin' at me like I'm Malfoy or something!"
Harry looked away from his friends and stared at the scenery instead. Ron's words had cut through him like a dagger. His face was angry, but inside he was blushing darker then Hermoine and scared his friends would find out what he had been staring at earlier. "Harry...I'm sorry. I shouldn't have snapped at you like that." said Ron sheepishly. "No Ron it's okay." replied Harry. "You were right, I was being a git about it. I'm sorry." Harry was still looking away, but his angry expression changed to one of sorrow. "It's okay Harry." said Hermoine in a caring voice. "We were being prats too. Weren't we Ron!?" she asked in a stern voice. "Yeah. Really big prats!" he replied half honestly and half cause Hermoine had scared the hell out of him! "Thanks guys, you really are the best mates anyone could ask for!" Harry smiled and looked at them once again.
The rest of the ride to Hogwarts was quiet. His friends haden't noticed, but Harry was staring again. Staring at none other then Draco Malfoy!
--------------------------------The first move-------------------------------------
The Great Hall buzzed with excitement after the feast. The prefects were hurring first years to their houses as other students walked their way to their rooms.
Harry, Ron, and Hermione sat quietly untill most of the other students had gone. It was always better to linger a little so they didn't get trampled by everyone else.
"By the way Harry, you never told us what you were looking at earlier." said Hermione as she remembered their earlier conversation.
"Yeah! You never did, did you?" said Ron in a questioning voice.
"I was just watching the thestrals pull the carriges, that's all." Harry replied. If he had told them the truth they would have asked so many questions and Harry was sure Hermione would put it all together and find out exactly why he had been staring.
"Really...is that all Harry?" asked Hermione as she looked at him from the corner of her eye as if trying to read his mind.
"Yup, that's all." Harry lied again. "Hey I'll be right back." He said as he got an idea.
"What? Where are you goin'?" Ron asked, confused.
"Bathroom. I'll meet you back in the common room." he called over his shoulder as he ran the other direction.
He turned a corned and pulled out the Marauder's map. "I solemly swear that I am up to no good" he said as he taped the piece of paper with his wand.
Suddenly small images and names of everyone in the castle were moving on the paper to show where they were. Harry scaned the map and found who he was looking for. He was alone and just down the hall in an empty classroom. Harry walked casually till he found the room and entered.
There, sitting on a table facing the door, was Draco Malfoy.
"Potter?" Draco said in his usual snide voice. "What do you want?"
"Hi Draco." Harry said, not calling him Malfoy on purpose. "Um I was just..."
"Just what?" Draco interrupted as he jumped off the desk. "You have something to say to me?" Draco barked as he took a few steps forward.
"Um n..no." Harry whispered.
"Well I have something to say to you Potter!" Draco yelled as he walked closer till they were only about two inches apart.
"W..what would that be?" Harry asked, his eyes widening as if Draco were a hungry lion, and he a very fat and tasty looking bunny.
Harry didn't know what had happened. Draco had closed his eyes and pressed his lips agains Harry's. Draco had kissed him.
Finally, after a few minutes of snogging, Draco backed away.
"Thank you." he said. "You saved my family and me. Thank you...Harry."
Draco turned and walked away. Harry just stood there, confused. Draco had kissed him and then he called him Harry!
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It had been a month since the incident in the class room. Harry was still shaken. he hadn't told Ron or Hermione about it, they wouldn't understand. But then again, neither did he.
Harry had decided to take the Marauder's Map with him wherever he went so he wouldn't bump into Draco while he was alone.
A lot had happened so far this year; 1.There was a new Potion Master, Professor Slughorn. 2. Snape had become the new Defense Against the Dark Arts teacher, much to Harry's discomfort. 3. He had gotten a Potions book that belonged to "The Half-Blood Prince" which helped him a lot in Potions. 4. Draco had kissed him!
Harry was sitting with Ron in Potions class as he looked through his book. The prince was very smart when it came to potions, he had even surpassed Hermione! So when Harry started seeing spells, he tried them out! One such spell was Levicourpus. It would hang you upside down by your ankle. It was more for fun in Harry's eyes, but it would be pretty helpful in a fight.
"Harry, what does the Prince say about love potions?" Ron asked while Slughorn chatted away with a few of his favorite students.
"What!? Why do you want a love potion?" harry asked in amazement.
"Well, there's someone I really like. But I don't know if they like me back, so I just wanted a love potion to start them up...you know?" Ron had turned at least fifty shades of red befor he finished talking.
"Oh um...here I guess you can look at this page." Harry turned open to a page on love potions. He was still confused, Ron had never acted like this before. What was going on?
The bell rang for the end of class and everyone hurried out. Everyone except Harry. He had stayed behind to clean his stuff up before he went back to the Gryffindore common room.
"Hello Harry" came a voice from behind him. "I've been trying to get you alone for some time now."
Harry turned and saw Draco Malfoy staring at him. It wasn't his usual stare either, it was firm but lighter. It wasn't angry, it was more like wanting!
"D..d..d..Draco!" Harry studdered as he backed away slowly from the boy in front of him. "W..why do you want to be alone with me?"
"Harry sit down please..." Draco pointed his wand at Harry as he spoke. "...or I'll use the Imperious curse on you!"
Harry's eyes widened as he reached for a chair and sat down.
"Good." mumbled Draco. he strode over very casually and sat on Harry's lap, looking deep into his eyes.
"Draco what are you..."
"Quiet!" ordered Draco as he pressed his finger against Harry's lips. "Harry I want to say something to you, but I wanted to be alone to say it." Draco's voice had softened, his eyes had sparkled happily as he rubed his hand up and down Harry's back.
"What the hell are you doing Draco!?" Harry yelled. Draco was holding him, staring at him, touching him in a very non Malfoy like way.
"Harry I said be quiet!" Draco barked at Harry.
"O...okay!" Harry mumbled as he shut his lips tightly together.
"Good. Now Harry...I want to say something, but it's hard for me. I just don't know what else to do. All I think about is you. All I dream about is you. All I want is you. Harry...I love you!"
Draco once again pressed his lips against Harry's. He assumed that Harry would be expecting this and would try to push him away, but he didn't. Harry had wraped his arms around Draco's waist and pulled his closer.
"Draco...I feel the same way. I love you too!"
(Warning!!! Part of this chapter is intense and will not be posted. If you wish to read the part that is "under the cloak" then pm me and I will give it to you.)
-------------------------------------Betrayed--------------------------------------
Three months had passed since Harry and Draco's love confessions and everything was becoming weirder by the day.
Ron was acting strange whenever he was alone with Harry. Draco was nicer to everyone. Harry was defending Draco.
The only one not acting strange was Hermione. She was still smart, still nice to her friends, and still hated Draco.
"Harry why do you keep protecting Malfoy? He's never been nice to you!" said Hermione one day at breakfast.
"Just because, okay? And his name is Draco!" replied Harry as he took a bite from his toast.
"I still say he's a jerk." Hermione said after finishing her orange juice. "But whatever Harry. I'll meet you two back in the common room, there's a essay due next Wednesday that I want finished."
After Hermione left the atmosphere was strangley calmer for some reason.
"Don't worry mate, she's mental! You knew that." Said Ron as he noticed Harry wasn't eating any more.
"yeah...I guess." Harry replied.
The food vanished to signal that breakfast was over and Harry and Ron walked back to the common room. But when they got there Draco was standing at the entrance, waiting for Harry.
"Hey Malfoy..." Yelled Ron as the reached him. "...What are you doin' 'er?"
"Don't worry Ron, I'll deal with Draco. You just go inside."
Ron left and Harry casually walked up to Draco.
"Follow me so we can be alone okay?" Harry asked as he turned around.
Draco grabed his robe and spun him on the spot. He pulled him in and kissed his lips in front of everyone in the area.
Harry's face was scarlet when Draco let him go. "Draco..w..what the hell!? Why the hell...in front of everyone!?!?" Harry paniced and looked around. At least fifty people had gathered around them and watched the little spectical Draco had performed for them.
"Harry I'm sick of hiding this from everyone! I love you and I don't care who knows it!"
Draco pulled Harry close and embraced him.
"I..I..I love you too Draco. Your right, I don't care if people know it." Harry smiled and squeezed Draco for everyone to see.
"I have to go now Harry, but I'll meet you in a few hours in the charms classroom so we can be alone."
He nibbled playfully on Harry's ear as he said "alone".
"Oh Draco! Yes, oh that feels sooo good!" Harry moaned. The guys around them laughed in amusement, the girls stared in aww at the hot sight they were beholding.
Draco let go of Harry and walked away. A few of the girls swarmed around Harry, but he ran into the common room before any of them asked questions.
Ron was sitting in an armchair in front of the fineplace. The golden light reflecting of his red hair looked amazing.
"Hey Ron." said Harry as he sat down next to his friend.
"Hey Harry, want a chocolate cauldren? They have this orange cream filling that is so good!" Ron said as he hastily shoved one into his mouth. "Mmmm! So good!" He moaned as he swallowed it.
"Sure I guess I'll have one." Harry reached into the box and took the last one and ate it.
"Oh wow! These are go...wow Ron...you..you look incredible!" harry looked at ron and gasped. His fiery red hair and his briliant face relfecting the light of the fire was...breath takeing!
"Really? Thanks Harry...um...you wanna go upstairs?" asked Ron, his face turning as red as his hair.
"M..me? Yes!" Harry jumped up and grabed Ron's hand. They ran up to the boy's dormitory and sat on Ron's bed.
They kissed passionately for a long time and then left.
"Hey...let's go to the Charms class room. No one should be there right now." said Ron
"R..Ron! Oh yes, let's go!"
They ran down numerous flights of stairs and through a couple hallways before they got to the classroom. Ron layed Harry on an empty table and...
(under the invisability cloak pm me for what happens)
Draco herd moaning from the Charms class room and walked in.
"H..Harry!.........How could you!?" He ran off, crying into his sleave, back to the Slytherin common room.
"Huh? D..Draco...what?" Harry snaped awake from a trance. He was in the charms classroom, but he wasn't with Draco...he was with Ron!
"Ahhh! R..Ron what the hell are we doing!?!?"
"Well we were doing a little bit of this..." said Ron as he pressed his lips against Harry's.
"N..No! Ron you a**! I'm with Draco! I love him and now...Oh my god Ron! How could you do this to me!?...the chocolate cauldrons...they had love potion!"
Harry slaped Ron across the face and ran to the Gryphindor common room. He layed down in his bed and cried all night. His best friend had betrayed him.
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Posted: Wed Jul 25, 2007 11:49 am
--------------------------------The first move------------------------------------- The Great Hall buzzed with excitement after the feast. The prefects were hurring first years to their houses as other students walked their way to their rooms.
Harry, Ron, and Hermione sat quietly untill most of the other students had gone. It was always better to linger a little so they didn't get trampled by everyone else.
"By the way Harry, you never told us what you were looking at earlier." said Hermione as she remembered their earlier conversation.
"Yeah! You never did, did you?" said Ron in a questioning voice.
"I was just watching the thestrals pull the carriges, that's all." Harry replied. If he had told them the truth they would have asked so many questions and Harry was sure Hermione would put it all together and find out exactly why he had been staring.
"Really...is that all Harry?" asked Hermione as she looked at him from the corner of her eye as if trying to read his mind.
"Yup, that's all." Harry lied again. "Hey I'll be right back." He said as he got an idea.
"What? Where are you goin'?" Ron asked, confused.
"Bathroom. I'll meet you back in the common room." he called over his shoulder as he ran the other direction.
He turned a corned and pulled out the Marauder's map. "I solemly swear that I am up to no good" he said as he taped the piece of paper with his wand.
Suddenly small images and names of everyone in the castle were moving on the paper to show where they were. Harry scaned the map and found who he was looking for. He was alone and just down the hall in an empty classroom. Harry walked casually till he found the room and entered.
There, sitting on a table facing the door, was Draco Malfoy.
"Potter?" Draco said in his usual snide voice. "What do you want?"
"Hi Draco." Harry said, not calling him Malfoy on purpose. "Um I was just..."
"Just what?" Draco interrupted as he jumped off the desk. "You have something to say to me?" Draco barked as he took a few steps forward.
"Um n..no." Harry whispered.
"Well I have something to say to you Potter!" Draco yelled as he walked closer till they were only about two inches apart.
"W..what would that be?" Harry asked, his eyes widening as if Draco were a hungry lion, and he a very fat and tasty looking bunny.
Harry didn't know what had happened. Draco had closed his eyes and pressed his lips agains Harry's. Draco had kissed him.
Finally, after a few minutes of snogging, Draco backed away.
"Thank you." he said. "You saved my family and me. Thank you...Harry."
Draco turned and walked away. Harry just stood there, confused. Draco had kissed him and then he called him Harry!
(End chapter two! It was kind of short, but I still hav more to come so don't worry)
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Posted: Thu Jul 26, 2007 6:13 pm
Well, this is kind of what I was hoping would happen in Harry Potter actually. But, what about Snape, what happens to him... please, keep up with this story, I am interested in it.
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Posted: Fri Jul 27, 2007 7:38 am
-----------------------------------Potions class------------------------------------
It had been a month since the incident in the class room. Harry was still shaken. he hadn't told Ron or Hermione about it, they wouldn't understand. But then again, neither did he.
Harry had decided to take the Marauder's Map with him wherever he went so he wouldn't bump into Draco while he was alone.
A lot had happened so far this year; 1.There was a new Potion Master, Professor Slughorn. 2. Snape had become the new Defense Against the Dark Arts teacher, much to Harry's discomfort. 3. He had gotten a Potions book that belonged to "The Half-Blood Prince" which helped him a lot in Potions. 4. Draco had kissed him!
Harry was sitting with Ron in Potions class as he looked through his book. The prince was very smart when it came to potions, he had even surpassed Hermione! So when Harry started seeing spells, he tried them out! One such spell was Levicourpus. It would hang you upside down by your ankle. It was more for fun in Harry's eyes, but it would be pretty helpful in a fight.
"Harry, what does the Prince say about love potions?" Ron asked while Slughorn chatted away with a few of his favorite students.
"What!? Why do you want a love potion?" harry asked in amazement.
"Well, there's someone I really like. But I don't know if they like me back, so I just wanted a love potion to start them up...you know?" Ron had turned at least fifty shades of red befor he finished talking.
"Oh um...here I guess you can look at this page." Harry turned open to a page on love potions. He was still confused, Ron had never acted like this before. What was going on?
The bell rang for the end of class and everyone hurried out. Everyone except Harry. He had stayed behind to clean his stuff up before he went back to the Gryffindore common room.
"Hello Harry" came a voice from behind him. "I've been trying to get you alone for some time now."
Harry turned and saw Draco Malfoy staring at him. It wasn't his usual stare either, it was firm but lighter. It wasn't angry, it was more like wanting!
"D..d..d..Draco!" Harry studdered as he backed away slowly from the boy in front of him. "W..why do you want to be alone with me?"
"Harry sit down please..." Draco pointed his wand at Harry as he spoke. "...or I'll use the Imperious curse on you!"
Harry's eyes widened as he reached for a chair and sat down.
"Good." mumbled Draco. he strode over very casually and sat on Harry's lap, looking deep into his eyes.
"Draco what are you..."
"Quiet!" ordered Draco as he pressed his finger against Harry's lips. "Harry I want to say something to you, but I wanted to be alone to say it." Draco's voice had softened, his eyes had sparkled happily as he rubed his hand up and down Harry's back.
"What the hell are you doing Draco!?" Harry yelled. Draco was holding him, staring at him, touching him in a very non Malfoy like way.
"Harry I said be quiet!" Draco barked at Harry.
"O...okay!" Harry mumbled as he shut his lips tightly together.
"Good. Now Harry...I want to say something, but it's hard for me. I just don't know what else to do. All I think about is you. All I dream about is you. All I want is you. Harry...I love you!"
Draco once again pressed his lips against Harry's. He assumed that Harry would be expecting this and would try to push him away, but he didn't. Harry had wraped his arms around Draco's waist and pulled his closer.
"Draco...I feel the same way. I love you too!"
(Yeah! Confessions of gay love!)
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Posted: Sat Jul 28, 2007 2:53 pm
Please post. Chapter four coming soon ^_^
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Posted: Fri Aug 03, 2007 12:31 pm
Please poste more! rofl Love it soo much!! heart heart
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Posted: Fri Aug 03, 2007 4:28 pm
Thank you!
Anyway, chapter four get pretty graphic, so a lot of it will not be posted and will be "under the invisability cloak".
If you want to know what happens, then PM me.
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Posted: Mon Aug 06, 2007 11:11 am
(Warning!!! Part of this chapter is intense and will not be posted. If you wish to read the part that is "under the cloak" then pm me and I will give it to you.)
-------------------------------------Betrayed--------------------------------------
Three months had passed since Harry and Draco's love confessions and everything was becoming weirder by the day.
Ron was acting strange whenever he was alone with Harry. Draco was nicer to everyone. Harry was defending Draco.
The only one not acting strange was Hermione. She was still smart, still nice to her friends, and still hated Draco.
"Harry why do you keep protecting Malfoy? He's never been nice to you!" said Hermione one day at breakfast.
"Just because, okay? And his name is Draco!" replied Harry as he took a bite from his toast.
"I still say he's a jerk." Hermione said after finishing her orange juice. "But whatever Harry. I'll meet you two back in the common room, there's a essay due next Wednesday that I want finished."
After Hermione left the atmosphere was strangley calmer for some reason.
"Don't worry mate, she's mental! You knew that." Said Ron as he noticed Harry wasn't eating any more.
"yeah...I guess." Harry replied.
The food vanished to signal that breakfast was over and Harry and Ron walked back to the common room. But when they got there Draco was standing at the entrance, waiting for Harry.
"Hey Malfoy..." Yelled Ron as the reached him. "...What are you doin' 'er?"
"Don't worry Ron, I'll deal with Draco. You just go inside."
Ron left and Harry casually walked up to Draco.
"Follow me so we can be alone okay?" Harry asked as he turned around.
Draco grabed his robe and spun him on the spot. He pulled him in and kissed his lips in front of everyone in the area.
Harry's face was scarlet when Draco let him go. "Draco..w..what the hell!? Why the hell...in front of everyone!?!?" Harry paniced and looked around. At least fifty people had gathered around them and watched the little spectical Draco had performed for them.
"Harry I'm sick of hiding this from everyone! I love you and I don't care who knows it!"
Draco pulled Harry close and embraced him.
"I..I..I love you too Draco. Your right, I don't care if people know it." Harry smiled and squeezed Draco for everyone to see.
"I have to go now Harry, but I'll meet you in a few hours in the charms classroom so we can be alone."
He nibbled playfully on Harry's ear as he said "alone".
"Oh Draco! Yes, oh that feels sooo good!" Harry moaned. The guys around them laughed in amusement, the girls stared in aww at the hot sight they were beholding.
Draco let go of Harry and walked away. A few of the girls swarmed around Harry, but he ran into the common room before any of them asked questions.
Ron was sitting in an armchair in front of the fineplace. The golden light reflecting of his red hair looked amazing.
"Hey Ron." said Harry as he sat down next to his friend.
"Hey Harry, want a chocolate cauldren? They have this orange cream filling that is so good!" Ron said as he hastily shoved one into his mouth. "Mmmm! So good!" He moaned as he swallowed it.
"Sure I guess I'll have one." Harry reached into the box and took the last one and ate it.
"Oh wow! These are go...wow Ron...you..you look incredible!" harry looked at ron and gasped. His fiery red hair and his briliant face relfecting the light of the fire was...breath takeing!
"Really? Thanks Harry...um...you wanna go upstairs?" asked Ron, his face turning as red as his hair.
"M..me? Yes!" Harry jumped up and grabed Ron's hand. They ran up to the boy's dormitory and sat on Ron's bed.
They kissed passionately for a long time and then left.
"Hey...let's go to the Charms class room. No one should be there right now." said Ron
"R..Ron! Oh yes, let's go!"
They ran down numerous flights of stairs and through a couple hallways before they got to the classroom. Ron layed Harry on an empty table and...
(under the invisability cloak pm me for what happens)
Draco herd moaning from the Charms class room and walked in.
"H..Harry!.........How could you!?" He ran off, crying into his sleave, back to the Slytherin common room.
"Huh? D..Draco...what?" Harry snaped awake from a trance. He was in the charms classroom, but he wasn't with Draco...he was with Ron!
"Ahhh! R..Ron what the hell are we doing!?!?"
"Well we were doing a little bit of this..." said Ron as he pressed his lips against Harry's.
"N..No! Ron you a**! I'm with Draco! I love him and now...Oh my god Ron! How could you do this to me!?...the chocolate cauldrons...they had love potion!"
Harry slaped Ron across the face and ran to the Gryphindor common room. He layed down in his bed and cried all night. His best friend had betrayed him.
(Ron you *****!!!)
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Posted: Tue Apr 22, 2008 6:33 am
Um...sorry about never writing the "under the invisability cloak" part...I'd jst haven't felt like it. I'm trying to work on Chapter 5 now. Hopefully it'll be up soon.
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Posted: Tue Jun 24, 2008 11:57 pm
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