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Fai's Sketchbook - Updated 7/4/11

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Faithom

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Posted: Mon Dec 21, 2009 11:23 am

Yay updated! : D

Need to take advantage of this guild ahaha.

Posted: Mon Dec 21, 2009 1:34 pm

Hehe, wow your artwork is simply astonishing. Very wonderful indeed.

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Faithom

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Posted: Mon Dec 21, 2009 5:22 pm

XD Haha thanks.

Still learning.

Needs help. >.<

Posted: Wed Dec 30, 2009 12:28 am

Update! Haha waist is too long/skinny. Left shoulder's off.
Couldn't make an expression that went w/ his face, so I went with a smirk. :c Still looks slightly awkward. Baaaah.

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Errol McGillivray
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Posted: Wed Dec 30, 2009 9:58 am

You really need to learn the shape of the skeleton. Even if you keep it simple, you'll realize that your ribcage shouldn't be smaller than your head. It really helps you keep things looking more natural and possible.

For sketch 2, things diminish as they move away. Her arm that is moving away from the viewer should look like it's getting farther, so the hand would be smaller.

Posted: Mon Nov 22, 2010 3:19 am

New piece! sad could use tips on how to color fabric and making cloth look actually like cloths w/o having to rely on textures... [right now I feel like it looks like she's encased in saran[sp?] warp]

Faithom

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Faithom

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Posted: Thu Dec 16, 2010 11:48 pm

Finished piece here:
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Posted: Mon Jul 04, 2011 1:54 am

Update!

Just wanted to post something and see how it looked out of photoshop. :>

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Faithom

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Faithom

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Posted: Mon Jul 04, 2011 2:05 am

Try 2 for size comparison. Also did some small edits.
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Posted: Tue Jul 05, 2011 8:20 am

There are some minor areas that could use some structure and volume, but overall it looks pretty good.

Try to check out actual wings. There are different types of feathers that serve different functions and have much different shapes and textures. I forget what they're called, but the long, strong feathers that make flight possible are missing and are the ones that people think of when they think "wings".

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